OOOOH! That was totally an awesome chapter! Oh, if I were one of the lovely soldiers, I'd probably wet my pants...;D So, the general dude is apart of this all, eh? Too bad Miranda couldn't make it...

Anyway! I really like how you're making up your own breeds and all that; it makes the story more original and interesting. I think your own necromorphs are great! They are quite interesting, and of course, terrifying. Thinking about the Lancer makes me want to cringe... (Makes me so glad that these things/creatures don't really exist in the real world!)

Again, awesome chapter, and update whenever you can!

Alright, lemme tell ya, I began reading this at night, and I got pretty scared! Seriously, the creature thingy, or I guess stalker? Or yeah, I'm pretty sure that's what they were called, anyway, the image I got in my head, was actually quite scary! But that's alright, in fact, it's a good thing! I love to have a good scare! (I like scary movies, stories, and all that stuff...just not to the totally, ultra mega, high, extreme scary/gory stuff...)

Anyway, this is a really interesting story, and I'm liking it, A LOT! So, you keep up the good work, and keep it coming!

(By the way, please forgive me of my laziness to log in to my account...;D)

I almost forgot about this story! This was a WONDERFUL chapter!

Dark: Well, well, well; they going to last longer upon that island; that is unless something else gets to them. In their minds, what fun that'll be :)

Light: I gotta say, that family truly watches out for their own, unlike mine unfotunantly -_-

Me: I may have a few ideas for some extra security personal; i'll be sure to send ya a PM about them, until then. Keep this up :)

If u make this so alvin as issac and brittany as his girlfriend who kills herself, let her survive

Dark: There will be blood...enough said

Me: This just have a good scare :)

So awesome! Even though I don't play Dead Space, now I know so much about it! It's so cool! :D

:O WOW. This is absolutely WONDERFUL!

Just..just..WOW! I can't describe how good this is so far!

And you know, you don't have to censor curse words to keep it teen. xD

cool sounds a bit like Forbidden Siren its also a Horror Game with Zombies and one could see the vision of the Zombies, i mean what the Zombies see its awesome that game but also Brutal, i think i would like your story

Wow...so exciting already! :D

Things'll get more worse, now will they? But this was good can't wait for more juicy bits about this story

WOW! This is simply AMAZING! I can't WAIT to see how this unfolds! :D