| Reviews for Unteach |
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MelancholyMadness chapter 4 . 1/20/2012 Good job! I liked how you portrayed the characters! |
SchemingAlchemist chapter 4 . 1/18/2012 Awesome~ This whole story was short and sweet (perfect to read while studying for midterms!) and well in-character, and it was definitely enjoyable to read. The way Matthew thought so hard about his feelings (and expressing them) was really sweet, and Gil's reaction showed a serious side that's not usually written about (but definitely there). The ending was very nice as well-Matt's "I'm sure. I'm sure I'm sure" makes me want to cheer at his optimism, which is a step farther than his usual nervousness...great! The artwork for these chapters was really nice, too-the way you drew them was definitely awesome-looking. :) Great job, and best wishes for your family as well! |
nobody10901 chapter 4 . 1/17/2012 Oh, this was so fluffy! Beautiful finish. I really enjoyed it... I could never confess to someone I liked. And Gilbert was really awesome. Seriously. He was giving Matthew a chance to realize what could happen... I loved it. Thanks for writing! |
nobody10901 chapter 3 . 1/11/2012 Oh, I really like this! Short and sweet. Mm, I like it. Longer chapters would be nicer, but this is a good length. Beautiful detail, incredible job. Brilliant. Keep it up! UPDATE SOON! Thanks! |
FoolishLittleDuck chapter 2 . 1/10/2012 ...Could we please have another chapter? A long one? Where they just get enough, confess and get together or something? IDK, I just want the drama and a happy ending! I'll dieee without a happy ending! DIE I TELL YOU! And you've got really nice material in just these two small chapters to make a long fanfiction that could really be freakishly good! Pleasepleaseplease oh pretty please with lots of sugarcubes on top of it! With a little cherry, too, because people appearantly like those... Continuation once more? ;w; |
gylfie9 chapter 2 . 1/9/2012 Continue please. :) this story is wonderful. |
The One Behind You chapter 1 . 1/8/2012 This is a good story though it has no plot (that's what partically makes it as good as it is.) You give another side to the shy Mattie that everyone always sees. It might be because he is drunk, but still. You do a wonderful job of expressing everything he would be feeling. The little thing with the shinguard made me smile. It is so random that it provides the littlest humor to make one laugh as they read such a deep story. I like at the end how you mention Gilbert liking girls. I think that is something often overlooked when most people write boyXboy. It just makes it more real. PruCan isn't one of my favorite pairings (I support RusCan,) but I think you do a very good job of writing that couple. Nice story exploring a drunken, in-love Canadian. ~The One Behind You |