*curls around this story hissing preciouss*

The kids are PERFECT. Sky is just childish enough without being annoying, River is SUCH A BRAT I get pissed at her but the gang don't take her shit which is lovely, dear Sarah is tremendous, and Rory! And Eleven! And Albus, bless his little heart, and JO.

*preciouuss*

well this is it. I loved this story its great that you tried to include so many characters into this story although some of them are a bit surpeithlish like jo and her grand son. but you wont them well and I loved when you named dropped Liss Shor nice. this story is a great look into what could of been for the sareh jane adventurs I herd a while ago that befor Miss Sladens death they were planeing on righting an episode with ACE! yes that Ace you know the one who blew up a dalek with a freeking RPG after beating up on daleks with a bassball bat god I love ACE. if I had one grip with this story is that is you trying to right in the plot of "the doctors wife" into this story were it could of stood on it own. but that's a nit pick. I hope you start righting this fanfiction again but if not say-la-ve.
this was a wonderful send up to the WHO verus. well done
Yours Alaster Boneman

interesting

wonderful chapter

great I really like this story I diced to do little revives in till I get to the end then I do one big final review with all my thoughts.

another great chapter

I like the tense in this chapter I always felt that sky still had a bit of her flash kind powers and as we saw her powers our directly linked to her emotional state. I also like the little jealousy that sky has for Luke it make sense as the show bit up Luke to be the best at petty much every thing their Sky would be jealous of her older brother. some of the words for AI's dialog were a bit confusing but I can ignore it easily enough. another great chapter. is it just me our can Rani and Clyde can not keep a secret to save their lives.
Yours Alaster Boneman

I've been meaning to read this story for awhile. its is great a nice start to this story I like how you betrayed Sky's personality it was very thoughtful I love the fact that is short of the stranger in a strange land and is the best why to tell her story. I miss the sarah jane advancers unlike the other doctor who spin offs it actual made me care about the characters unlike K9 and wasn't up its own ass like touch wood. unfortunately a lot of fan righters for the sarah jane advancers try to right Miss Sladen's death into their righting which is unfortunate. it is very sad that she dead but I believe we can keep the characters alive in fiction like this and In the end I think that's a great way to tribute what a wonderfully actor and person like Elisabeth Sladen and if something creative can come out of both her life and death then that can only be a good thing.
this was a good chapter and a beautiful to tribute a wonderful person.
Yours Alaster Boneman

This is lovely. It makes sense, if anyone was an expert on fixed points in time it would be Sarah Jane. Bless her heart. The kids are great as well (I'm with you on SJS/kuds fluffiness!) And I'm so glad nobodys taking Rivers crap...ooh she drives me bonkers! Any time u wanna write mire I'll be thrilled to read it!

It isn't over yet, right?

Earth To fleshkind Planet EMERGENCY LOCATE MS MEYERS SEND HER TO EARTH TO HELP FIND SKY Priority 1

Please write more of this story, 'cos its awesome

They should make an episode of Doctor Who Featuring The Return Of Sky Smith in wich Sky meets her adopted sister Jenny & her ol buddy/I suppose step dad The Doctor where The Doctor tells Sky " I am your step father.

Although they didn't Appear In Stolen Earth/Journeys Maria Jackson & Clyde Langer are verbally mentioned. Luke Is seen in both Parts of the episode & is again seen helping The (10th) Doctor having previously helped him with defeating That No Good Evil Fixed Point Altering Eternal Known Only As The Trickster ( I'm pretty Sure all 6 members of the 6 fold would yell him for it) even The Black Guardian Isn't Stupid Enough To Aater Fixed Points. 1 fixed point can be altered is the park vale insodint involving The Slitheen in the pilot season of The Sarah Jane Adventures wich was saposted to end with Night Of The Spectre wich never aired due to the death of Elisabeth Sladen in 2011.

LesaT in your summary of this Sarah Jane Adventures fanfic story you forgot to say & "The Doctor Dies" & it is so obvious that this is a crossover between Sarah Jane Adventures Season 5 episode 2 The Curse Of Clyde Langer Parts 1&2 & Doctor Who Episode The Wedding Of River Song.