Plz update its been a whole year

Hey again. It's been a while since I've been on, and there are no new chapters! Still, I thought I'd drop a line and provide a some praise and constructive criticism. First, the good. You have managed to capture something, as I look back on the story, that I think the actual TV show forgets: the fact that these are just kids. The mischievous Robin and unforgiving Artemis really help the story. However, as a frequent follower of the show, I must say that Kaldur, M'Gann, and Superboy come off as a little wooden, though I do understand that writing for an ensemble cast is a much larger task than a solo personality. Again, this primarily focuses on Wally and Artemis, as well as some mischief from Robin. What I would like to know is, having seen the whole show, what changes will you make to make the story more sequential with the bigger picture of the storyline? We knoew who the Light is, seen M'Gann as a white martian, and been introduced to the new 'Invasion' team. How will you adapt? And what are your thoughts on the changes made in the last few episodes and season 2?

what was she mad about? i forgot

Update soon and quickly please!

Heheh, Spitfire. Makes me smile.

Great chapter, btw (as always).

Also, love your Zatanna. I mean, she's not totally delirious like mine, which is a nice change of pace to read.

I will be eagerly awaiting the next update.

Stay Awesome and Happy Writings,

Vid.

Love this story so far and can't wait for more!

Robin no have eskrima sticks. Nightwing does. Rob has a collapsible staff.]

Uh oh wallies in trouble. For what I don’t know cantremember

well shit. whos the god damned mole and whos gonna shoot

go fast robin superboy you must hurry goooooooooooooooooooooo

evil cliffhanger

Surprise! Back to review again! (mostly because I want the next chapter-ASAP!) So, as I said in my previous review, the story is really consistent, although similar to the actual episode, "Infiltrator." This, however is easily overlooked. What's really grasping is how realistic the story is and how political it has become. Instead of dealing with Icicle Jr. and Klarion the Witch Boy, they're dealing with weapons dealers and lawyers, something that I've come to appreciate, although more serious costumed characters like Sportsmaster are involved. Once again, your handle on the characters is phenomenal, and I can tell you care about them like your own children. Now for what hasn't been as great since my last review. First, I think the direction of the story is a little misleading, steering the reader in one way before ripping the carpet right out from under their feet. Now, this can be a good or bad thing, you just have to be careful where you take us. Another thing is the fact that the chapters have been a little short, again, easily overlooked. Grammatically, you are doing okay, and I know you have been under pressure to post more often, so that I can understand. Actually, what's been bugging me is tense. One minute you're saying "she kicks in the door," and the next, "she kissed Wally on the cheek." These inconsistencies are bound to happen, but it wouldn't hurt for you to look out for them more. Finally, my last complaint is: where's Zatanna? Now that she's part of the team (see the March 3 episode), I think it would be awesome to put her in there. Just a request from a reader, but it would put a smile on my face.

Thanks again, and keep up the good work.

-GibGib

:)

i like your story, but is zatanna in it like the description?

NOOOO! Don't just leave it at that! What happens next! Must know! UPDATE SOON! OR I might not make it with all the suspense!

Good story!

yay i was right i is sportsmaster XD