Screw you cirex or crickex for the win

can you improvethe writing.

I have to admit this story was pretty good maybe a few things could be better but most of it was great keep up the good work

LoL THe vl laught ghin?! GENIUS!

Que buena historia , que estarán planeando caballero negro y cesar ahora ? :)

Me encanto este capitulo ! :)

You forgot to disclaim it.

Once again, spelling errors too many to count and nearly made me gag, aside from that good story line but I have to point out that the mind control technology used on Ben was designed to be used on E.V.O.s which Ben is not, I would have used Animo's mind control technology.

very good story, could go in any of the movies if that make for desert I had read "Hybrid" and "Hybrid 2" are excellent (good idea that electrical power will cause problems with nanites gives you something interesting) although I have to take advantage of letting an idea that turns me on the head
if rex wasted no memory? but erased it and what would happen if I delete who (preferably black knight) now try to erase the memory of ben? or worse, if the erase? I would do ben 10 no memory and a clock that does not even know for that is? your friends can help you?

note:I do not speak English , translated with translator on line, excuse typos

Yes! Make a third one!

Awesome! When I saw Promises, Promises I started collecting pictures of the biomechanical Evo at the beginning and Rex on the labs table strapped down. Rex had the same thing on his chest as the Evo and rex was found near where six landed in the smack hand. Plus all of Rex's machines besides the ones that came from the omega were on that Evo! *:)

Nice ending. Loved this story and the one before it. You got me hooked when I started reading it last night. While I'm not a huge fan of BreachxRex, this was a really good story. Can't wait for UAS 3.

Black Knight getting a hold of a Null Void Gun, uh-oh... DX

Rex's Mecha form! Awesome!

I just hope Ben isn't the ball! XD