Reviews for The Sage and Spider Girl
Lolomalollo chapter 2 . 6/20
Naruto is a super prude Christian.
Hey gut facts chapter 4 . 6/10
I got mad respect for you to be updating all your stories or you let us know the status of others. So many people abandon their stories but I always see you updating at least 3 chapters for different stories all the time. Great job
Muroshi chapter 4 . 6/10
when she says "I was expired by your example" it should be "inspired" as expired means died and inspired means motivated.
Otherwise hope to see more of this.
Samuel Santillan chapter 4 . 5/20
me gusto espero el proximo u a que super heroes esperas incliur en la historia y cual es el nemesis de naruto
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 4 . 4/22
It's good. Spider-Girl should web all creeps, it's not stated or implied the unconscious criminals are webbed. I needs more stories chapters. Thanks, stay well.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 3 . 4/22
So Spider-Girl must train herself before she gets with the superhero of her dreams, it makes sense. Thanks, be safe and well, God bless us.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 2 . 4/21
That is crazy good. Ain't it the worked up emotions, high stresses, etc...that kick starts then makes these mutate powers work and being untrue with yourself shuts the abilities down. Thanks, let's have our 2 meters long sticks or 2 yards long sticks to keep away the virus carriers.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 1 . 4/21
Good chapter. Where is Naruto? I think it's supposed to have a Naruto. M.J. having lots of abilities should match with the shinobi. Thanks, keep away from all viruses.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/15
You should do dazzling storm next
Jameslw chapter 4 . 4/17
Great Story Please continue
Guest chapter 4 . 4/7
Loving it but could you PLEASE add Black Cat?
Angelo47 chapter 4 . 4/8
I missed this story! Spider girl receiving ninja training from naruto! Combat wisdom and strategy will make her better than the average spider person.
hellfire45 chapter 4 . 4/7
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next
SPark681 chapter 4 . 4/7
Hmm, a nice story so far I wonder how Naruto will train spider girl anyways keep up the great work!
helrio uzugaku chapter 4 . 4/7
. shit, I gotta say I nearly had an anurizm when I saw THIS story being updated. I thought this story was abandoned YEARS ago. I LOVED the concept, the pairing, the potential this story had and was tempted a number of times to write a story in it's likeness. Then I remembered I stuck at writing stories and any story I wrote would be a disservice to stories with potential like this one.

I'm ecstatic that it's back. The earlier chapters could use a good update, I KNOW you've improved your writing style drastically since you first wrote this. They Don't need to be changed, but there were a few errors that should be corrected. Throughout the 1st 3 chapters Naruto is recognized as Shinobu, not sage, so if you plan on continuing the story with Sage as Naruto's hero name it would be wise to go back and change it.

I liked what you did here though. Welcome back to this story, I am very eager to see what you have planned.
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