yaaaaay! I love it! usually i hate oc's but yours is fantastic! please keep updating!

Brilliant!

Interesting turn of events... keep up the good work!

I don't blame melly my sister can be a pain alot. But please keep updating and if you could make the next chapter longer that would be great

Yeh I would probably be angry! Good chapter ;D

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one, that was a cliffhanger and a half!

You have to update this thing! It is too awesome!

Aah! It's getting really exciting now :) Brilliant job so far!

LUVIN IT! you have to update soon because its sooooooo good! i really wanna know if melwyn will forgive sapphire or not :D

ARRGHHHHHHHH! Please update this story soon! It is too awesome to drop! Gorran is a cool name, by the way.

Love this story please update as soon as you can

Hallo! Bad BETA hasn't reviewed! Sorry!

Still loving this so much!

I love the plot, I love the character of Melwyn...I just love the whole thing :D

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Okay, just disregard everything I said. I read the rest of the story and it was THE BOMB! Pleasex1000 update! And one question: are you going to put Faro in the story? Pleasex100. I also liked the fact that Conor and Rainbow get married... though I am still sad about Sadie. ): and (:

Good storyline (I keep saying that...), but the fact that Sadie dies is too sad! (crying...) But it was kind of necessary to the story, because I don't think Sapphire would have left if Sadie was still there. I also don't think Conor would be so calm about his sister leaving forever... he must be a very understanig person... I think.

just started reading this fanfic and I really like it! Great characterisation of Melwyn btw! Keep updating!