Reviews for Elizium for the Sleepless Souls
Nyumun chapter 9 . 7/14
Wow, simplemente sin palabras. Increible
GodOfDonuts chapter 9 . 6/4
Wow an exceptional story, so happy I stumbled upon it. Thanks for sharing!
mumphie chapter 9 . 4/7
Wow. i hoped for a happy ending. I guess I will have to envision it, that Harry found others to help. Perhaps other countries grew tired of the tyranny that was Britain.
MrKlortho chapter 9 . 12/17/2019
Wow, incredibly intriguing story. I would love to see a sequel, but this lives well as a one off
so perfect it hurts chapter 9 . 8/20/2019
Wow! I didn't really expect what this was when I clicked on it, but I really ended up enjoying reading it! I'm sure that's due to your writing skill because this is very different to my usually haunts as well :P

Thanks for taking the time to write. I loved your very believable characters and fancy plot twist!

- SPIH
ThreateningMedicine chapter 9 . 7/28/2019
WHat happened to her mother?
ThreateningMedicine chapter 6 . 7/27/2019
Wow, What a twist!
Guest chapter 9 . 4/26/2019
This was very good! Deeply enjoyed it, the buildup and the twist was fun. You're not around anymore, nevertheless this is a great read
bikermo chapter 9 . 3/14/2019
Unique, but unsatisfying.
Monster King chapter 9 . 1/8/2019
Great job
hypnoticageregression chapter 9 . 12/19/2018
Wow! I can't believe I'd never found this before. Chilling and fantastic. Thank you for writing.
Anon chapter 9 . 10/15/2018
This was not what I was expecting. This was amazing, I haven't read anything like it before and every chapter had great twists and revelations. Off to see if you wrote a sequel. Thanks for sharing!
the-fabulous-Jai chapter 9 . 10/8/2018
...wow. just. wow. blindingly unique concept, incredible writing style, and, just, wow. loved it.
HoosYourDaddy chapter 9 . 8/26/2018
Excellent stuff; enthralling, suspenseful, and ultimately satisfying. I don't think you need to write a sequel, honestly, unless you're just in the mood for a curbstomp. This brave new world wouldn't contain any characters we're familiar with, so you'd have to invent OCs out of whole cloth.

I'd also suggest changing the genre to Mystery/Horror instead of just Horror. You might be unknowingly losing readers, and the heart of the story is basically the reader trying to figure out what's going on.

Great work.
HoosYourDaddy chapter 7 . 8/26/2018
Wow. I admit, I did not see that coming, but it makes sense given the little clues you dropped.
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