| Reviews for Elizium for the Sleepless Souls |
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Nyumun chapter 9 . 7/14 Wow, simplemente sin palabras. Increible |
GodOfDonuts chapter 9 . 6/4 Wow an exceptional story, so happy I stumbled upon it. Thanks for sharing! |
mumphie chapter 9 . 4/7 Wow. i hoped for a happy ending. I guess I will have to envision it, that Harry found others to help. Perhaps other countries grew tired of the tyranny that was Britain. |
MrKlortho chapter 9 . 12/17/2019 Wow, incredibly intriguing story. I would love to see a sequel, but this lives well as a one off |
so perfect it hurts chapter 9 . 8/20/2019 Wow! I didn't really expect what this was when I clicked on it, but I really ended up enjoying reading it! I'm sure that's due to your writing skill because this is very different to my usually haunts as well :P Thanks for taking the time to write. I loved your very believable characters and fancy plot twist! - SPIH |
ThreateningMedicine chapter 9 . 7/28/2019 WHat happened to her mother? |
ThreateningMedicine chapter 6 . 7/27/2019 Wow, What a twist! |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/26/2019 This was very good! Deeply enjoyed it, the buildup and the twist was fun. You're not around anymore, nevertheless this is a great read |
bikermo chapter 9 . 3/14/2019 Unique, but unsatisfying. |
Monster King chapter 9 . 1/8/2019 Great job |
hypnoticageregression chapter 9 . 12/19/2018 Wow! I can't believe I'd never found this before. Chilling and fantastic. Thank you for writing. |
Anon chapter 9 . 10/15/2018 This was not what I was expecting. This was amazing, I haven't read anything like it before and every chapter had great twists and revelations. Off to see if you wrote a sequel. Thanks for sharing! |
the-fabulous-Jai chapter 9 . 10/8/2018 ...wow. just. wow. blindingly unique concept, incredible writing style, and, just, wow. loved it. |
HoosYourDaddy chapter 9 . 8/26/2018 Excellent stuff; enthralling, suspenseful, and ultimately satisfying. I don't think you need to write a sequel, honestly, unless you're just in the mood for a curbstomp. This brave new world wouldn't contain any characters we're familiar with, so you'd have to invent OCs out of whole cloth. I'd also suggest changing the genre to Mystery/Horror instead of just Horror. You might be unknowingly losing readers, and the heart of the story is basically the reader trying to figure out what's going on. Great work. |
HoosYourDaddy chapter 7 . 8/26/2018 Wow. I admit, I did not see that coming, but it makes sense given the little clues you dropped. |