That was great I enjoyed reading this story very much.

Wonderful story, loved seeing Tim having everything covered and all confident!

I enjoyed reading this story. The plot was original and interesting. The character development was very interesting. You have a wonderful imagination and great talent for writing. Thank you for posting.

Well i look forward to that squeal that you promised. If there a poll about who watching them I'm going to go with Gibbs. Cause he will want to see Tim get home safe and sound.

Hmm interesting story I enjoy reading it. If I was to take a guess I would say Gibbs is in the car.

Fantastic story I thought it was very interesting.

Nice I loved this story it was good.

awesome story good job

Oh this was good I so look forward to when you put up the squeal. I see Gibbs or Vance be the ones watching them.

Well this was good and look forward to when start the squeal. If you having a poll of who watching them. I would go with Tony.

Well looking forward to when you put up the squeal now I'm curious who is watching.

I've been putting off reading this because I just couldn't see the pairing working, but this is a completely disarming story that had me grinning from ear to ear. Would love to see a sequel.

Nice look forward to when you do the squeal.

Very good I liked it look forward to a squeal if there going to be one.

Did this ever progress into the sequel? There is something so disarmingly charming about this pairing.