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Its a shame that this story is all but dead.

Oh my god, this story is interesting! I love it-

*cut.* yeah that's what i want to say- but sadly i can't.

I don't understand half of this chapter, who the hell is blaire? Moragana? And some unknown people.

So yeah, i quit. Hmp. It's not interesting at all.

Hope you continue! Great story!

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Keep the chapters coming!

nice chapter I hope you update soon

is Gérard Jellal. it said blue haired boy after all

Welp. I don't know, this story keeps surprising me in ways you bend this. Ways I thought already done come back refreshed or like myself, I'm easily amused. But still great. Sadly you will probably never read this.

Damn...ok. Well it's sort of a client's beginning even if you made it slightly your way. After all this is old, but amazing. I personally really liked and would like to point things out...but it's kinda useless now, but hope others would give it a chance. If you read this, this is far beyond my reach but not for yours.

Its been 3 years author wheres that tenth chapter! :

Quite a nice start, with only one foul: the various summoners' descriptions felt really, really redundant. Even if they were main characters (which they are not) and an introduction was actually needed, their presentation would have been more elegant if it had been incorporated gradually within the narrative.

Other than that, the writing feels solid so far. As an introductory chapter, it was good.

Hope you update this again soon

The biggest thing that stands out is at least according to what I saw of chapter 2, Naruto is apparently getting dragon slayer magic and losing chakra and obviously the nine tails power. This Naruto is also fairly young, so basically you more or less have an original character at this point. That is not necessarily a bad thing, but it is not quite what I'd have expected given the title.

I wonder will Wendy learn Sky Dragon's roar because she learns this very early because it is her most basic attack and she will need it because in the original story she is not a flower but a little badass girl that can kick your butt because she does learn Dragon Force, and she showed that she can stand up for herself, and I also haven't seen Carla yet because it is typical for all Dragon Slayers to have these cats with them.