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I wish u would finish this story it is a great story!

I really love how you write Bepo!

XD Phi-Brain! I caught that reference almost instantly and was very curious whether or not you'd gotten it from the show. Lol, leave it to Law to solve the un-solvable maze in a matter of moments ;)

Looking forward to the next chapter!

You better finish this story or the curiousity will kill me seriously though hurry up and post another chapter i need it now! By the way i love the story so yeah :) I am going crazy over it but u really should have been more detailed about the yaoi between law and pandora it would have added more to read and would be just great :) mwahahahaha
And now PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER AND THEN FINISH THIS STORY. I WILL DIE IF YOU DONT. :)

When are you going to finish the story? I've been waiting for almost a year now ; (

Update immediately, please!

looking forward to the next one!

SHIP IT. SO HARD.

you know that bit where penguin and shachi drifted out like "plastic bags"? yeah, katy perry's voice began playing in my head:

do you ever feel
like a plastic bag
floating in the wind
wanting to start again?

hahahaha. oh, and i hope pandora pulls one over law soon. that punk deserves it.

you're stuck in a submarine with a mysterious walking, talking bear and what do you do? hug him. same, pandora. same.

I absolutely adore this fic, and i have to say that this re-vamped version of chapter 18 is infact alot better and eventful. Im so excited to see how this will progress, character development has been impeccable.. im so excited for this fic! Please do continue & im also very excited for your akashi x oc fic as well! We love the same animes and i just love your stories, making them all to be very enjoyable reads. :)

This is great!

(Accidentally clicked the post button :s)
Firstly thank you for giving me something to read. Around this time of year so many stories seem to die off due to everyone being so into Christmas :)
Your version of an Oc for Law seems to work well, unlike others, especially physically describing the scene. Another thing you did well was introducing the story, if I recall her ring became snagged on Bepo's fur? Very original. (*re-reads beginning*) Impressed I remembered :)
However where's a review without critics? :3
I haven't re-read your story in a while so I don't know if this applies to previous chapters, but you seem to use "he, she and the persons name" quite frequently when starting a sentence. It not a bad technique to use when writing, but by changing this slightly it would make your stories more interesting and fluent.
One of the things that drew me to this story was your title, which for me could have been used more frequently to tie the story together slightly better.
A part on the story I particularly would have changed in this chapter would be the description of the 'bad guy'. I just felt that he wasn't thought out as well as some of the other characters; given unattractive traits, an ugly personality and no redeeming features. You could have spent more time on him and squeezed a few more good scenes from his presence... Just saying :P
I loved the story overall, well done :DDD X