haaaw! hot AND cute!

I like your style of writing and this was very nicely done, the word that initially came to mind when I finished reading this was that it this was very 'tastefully' written, nice work. Admittedly I haven't read any of the other submissions will have to go check them out.

Your best story so far in my humble opinion! I really had chills (wait, that sounds like orgasm...JK ahahahah). Really, I saved this on my phone and I'll read it again, over and over. It is great imagining this scene, then maybe put it on the screen. I strongly hoped for it to happen. These two days have been crazy, I was really upset and sad about Paget leaving because I'm gonna miss her so much, I'm gonna miss Emily but more than anything I'm gonna miss Prentiss and Hotch. I really had a feeling about their love story to happen but now everything I expected and wished for has crumbled down. I'll be extremely unhappy when Emily's last appereance will finally arrive and I'll be even more when everything will come to an end. I'll just be there thinking "when is the next flight they're catching? Where are they headed to? How many great moments will I lmiss?"

When something you like and you're truly inspired from just ends, it's like something of yours is lost (even for a tv show, yes). I'll be thinking they're just doing their job as usual, to the fullest, but just hidden from cameras, and my thoughts will be supported by your amazing, tremendously written fanfictions...

Thank you so much 3

Oh la la! M rated! I hope the N in Nooshin means you can write some naughty jazz, haha!

I WILL ALWAYS LOVE THE IDEA OF EM BEING ! ALWAYS.

Oh goodness, I bet that would be quite a sight ;)

They're so rebellious...I love it!

Airplane restroom...See, that's exactly what my thoughts were when we got that picture of them on the jet alone ;)

AW, I'm allowed to find the idea of Hotch throwing her into the pool adorable, right? No? Maybe not? Oops.

Ah, well they do refer to him as HOTch for a reason!

Hnnng, I love the idea of Hotch swearing. Just makes him even hotter, to me!

NO, them having a baby would NOT be bad!

THAT WAS HOT. LIKE, REALLY HOT. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY.

I just loved your story, thanks for existing - I LOVE YOU. I only reviewed now 'cause i forgot my fanfiction password(just ignore my stupidity on this), so here it is, my review.

Loved it! I liked how 'lovey dovey' they were!

I love your writing style. The words are vibrant and the action is easy to visualize. You paint a very vivid, colorful picture of the love and hotness between Hotch and Emily. I'm really enjoying this smut challenge and am glad you entered.

Okay, a diving board, that was new to me. So I think I will have to give you the most unusual location award, IMO.

Who would have thought these two very private people would be such exhibitionists!

Thanks for participating in the smut challenge!

Good job I'm glad u guys r doing this challenge it's soo much fun for me

Naughty Nooshin!

I really loved it! Every story from this challenge had something different & special going for it but I must say that your spot for their sexual encounter was by far the most public! A DIVE BOARD? ROFLOL! I loved it. What a momentum that fibre board must have given them :D

I just adored how it went from 'wild sex' to 'making love' and then perhaps a Baby. .. . . . *deep happy sigh*

Thank you!

Ooh Nooshin! How I wish you had written in detail the gondola scene. Hot! And the diving board, ah, very creative! I thought it might have been the swimming pool, but you made it even more interesting! I loved you sex scene and the fact that they were so in love, AND married was the total cherry on top. Loved this fic!

Oh...

Oh...

I just love your writing.

I think I've told you that before, but I do, so very much.

There is this thing that you do with the characters that is the perfect mix of heat/intensity and love that just bleeds off the page when you are reading it. It's always a joy to read.

You capture the reader so early in the beginning of everything that you post and before you know it, you've gotten to the end and it leaves you wishing there was something more, that it wasn't over.

Truly, my friend, you are a wonderful talent and I always look forward to the days when I have time to read your stories... I just wish I had more of it.

I'm sorry I took so long to review but I was distracted by other things and I wanted to actually take the time to think about what I was going to say to you.

And by the way... You're location rocked and you beat the hell out of mine!

Thank you so much for joining us in our madness and if it happens to strike again, I hope you join us then too!

Much Love, Brandy

Amazing!

Wow that was amazing and hottt! And I have been to Venice so I was able to picture them there. Great job!

Oh my Nooshin...

Yours was hands down the sweetest smut out of all of the challengers.

Great job, just the right amount of steamy smut and romance. :)