Wow awesome story thank you thank

Thank you

That was great

I get so focus on the story my thoughts are hard to write. I am loving how your mind works I have read this before and have forgotten just enough to be mesmerized by huit all.

Sometimes I hate this story so damn bad. It's at the point
she is reciting her last message to her family & Edward is
sitting taking it into his memory to give to them later. When
she breaks down crying I also joined her...& him.
I haven't cried like this in so long...it was heart wrenching
sobs. For her...but mainly for him. He breaks my heart.
I LOVE this Edward.
I guess in a way I am also crying for myself, as I also don't
have very long left on this earth. It's not like Beth uttering
a few choice words & before I even finish saying them I am
no more.
No, God has plans for seeing me hurt until my last breath.
I'm not sure what I did so horrible to not deserve a dignified
death of no pain, or not very much pain. But it must have been
a doozy.
Enough, I just want you to know I have a love/hate bond with
this story & I have taken GREAT pleasure in recommending it
to people to read.
It is a WONDERFULLY BEAUTIFUL story even though it deals
with so much pain for Edward.
He does come out of this hell, but dear God the pain he went
through to get to the other side.
Thank you for sharing it with me.
This has to be at LEAST the 5th time I've read it if not more.
I will continue to plug it when asked.
Thanks again...

Loved the chapter, just one correction: Bengalian should be Bengali. We Bengalis refer to ourselves as such (at least in English). In other words, if you speak the language or are from the region you are Bengali (like me!).

Beyond pleased that Tagore was included here.

SPOILER ALERT (don't read if you want to keep things a surprise)
Ok so i skipped to the end of this story to check bella and edward were still together when i began this story as i don't cope with unhappy endings and i noticed something about renesmee giving birth. I only skinned over bits of it but i didn't catch a name. I my making a prediction that renesmee names her daughter elizabeth/Beth in honour of the two women (other then bella who is his main score of course ) that saved her daddy.

I can't help but wonder how there are any trees left around their home also i hope he opens up to Bella and Carlisle soon and tells them everything

Another review for chapter 9 and previous: I like this. This is amazing to follow. Thanks for writing!

What a wonderful ending! I’m sad that I’ve reached the end; I thoroughly enjoyed this well-written story. Thanks so much!

Excellent buildup of tension and description of the mental chess battle taking place before the physical. Masterfully done!

That fight scene between Carlisle and Edward was hot! Lovin’ me some feral Daddy C.

what a wonderful story ... dark but I loved it! thank you for sharing your words :)

Wow wow wooow. This was the sequel to Breaking Dawn that I didn’t know I needed. And it wasn’t what I expected at all from the description. I loved how thought-out everyone’s roles were. And the struggle between Edward and his monster, and how he reconciled them. So so good. Thanks for sharing!

I don't think there are many stories on FF that are so completely satisfying. Thank you for sharing your incredible talent and bring this story to a perfect end.