Can’t wait for the next update take your time though :)

First off welcome back from your trip. Second a little advice . If your not going to spell out the whole word, don’t use the word at all. By censoring swear words I can under stand your trying to be considerate to younger ages and those who don’t like swear words, yet still show your character is swearing. But unfortantly by censoring it with the Astrid symbol it breaks the smoothness of the writing and the reader out of the trance they get when well reading.

This is so good! I'm sad to see that this hasn't been updated in awhile but I do sincerely hope you finish this story! You are getting so close to the ending of the Brotherhood plot! I want to see how this ends! Keep up the good work!

Chick is a sexist term for women.
Insulting.

BEST FMA READ IN A WHILE! GOOD JOB!

WTF WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS, DUDE?
Even though I can just go to the next chapter and immediately cheat up said cliffhanger but STILL.

Woo! Super cute under-the-covers cuddling scene! Every time Ed blushes at something like that I go "awwww"
It's so great!

Well after months of waiting it's good to finally read another chapter. Been too long for me that I couldn't remember what happened in the last chapter, so a rereading session was in order. Geedculus makes it easier to tell between the two, though Greedling works too. Was that not you who used that name before?

At this point, I really wouldn't have minded a sex scene in there. It would have deepen their relationship by a lot too, had it happened. Anyway, keep it up! Looking forward to the next one, as well as the drawings.

OMG this story is soo exciting! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!

Been forever since your last update, but it's all good cuz this one will keep me satisfied for a few more hours. So you better have started working on the next one! Oh and...2 Greeds?! Why didn't you name the other Greed (not Ling) differently? It gets pretty confusing at times, I know they still call him Ling but...yeah...confusing.

Anyway, I'll be honest with you- I really liked that chapter, a lot. It might've been the EJ and Ed moments. Great job as always. It's really sad that I read this chapter in a party, in my defense it did hit rock bottom by the time I finished the chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Keep it up! -That line is a registered trademark now. I'll sue anyone who uses it!

As usual, a great chapter
Loved the omake :D
I'm a sucker for Alice in Wonderland AUs. Love them :) But I think I'd be interested in any AU you write.

Hey! You better make a new chapter or I will get you along will the Elric brothers and scar and Izumi and the ice queen General Armstrong! *gestures to all of them standing behind me menceingly*

Thank you for not swearing in this story it's hard to find one that doesn't

Lust is a girl! Stupid muggle...

Awww ed and ej are the bed couple EVER! *insert girly sqeel that I almost never do here*