Reviews for The Human Vault
ColonelJayWrites chapter 16 . 5/27
Well, Doug's out of the list. Who really is the voice?
ColonelJayWrites chapter 11 . 5/27
Hmmmm... I'll be honest, I don't like The Voice, as in, I don't like its character. I'll probably change my mind after a while, but the overall personality seems too bland. I don't know. Wait and see, I guess.
ColonelJayWrites chapter 10 . 5/27
I'm starting to think Doug isn't dead after all. Maybe he's the voice... Just a thought.
singertobe chapter 32 . 2/13/2018
That was a deep ending
singertobe chapter 27 . 2/13/2018
I love Prometheus' way of talking. He makes everything sound like a fairytale
singertobe chapter 26 . 2/13/2018
Uh-oh...
singertobe chapter 16 . 2/4/2018
At first I thought this program was Doug. But now that theory is out the window. Hmmm who could it be?...
singertobe chapter 11 . 2/4/2018
Hmm what an interesting mystery this is
singertobe chapter 5 . 1/9/2018
this is really good
singertobe chapter 3 . 1/8/2018
As soon as she said "My little bird..." I was like "Oh boy! GLaDOS is gonna lose it!"
Macmine411 chapter 47 . 12/9/2017
I feel like you should finish this one first before rewriting it. I hate cliff hangers and this is SOO good!
Tyler chapter 46 . 11/20/2017
YES! Thank you so much! I came across this fic back in 2013, when I was trying to find anything new on the Portal universe, after replaying the games a hundred times. I read it religiously and I always thought it was amazing. When you stopped updating I was very sad, and I kept checking back every few months in hopes it was started again. I just now decided to do so again, and here you are having updated a mere three days ago! What timing. I'll definitely keep up with the new story, and thank you again.
Name here chapter 46 . 11/11/2017
You and DasBoSchitt updating on the same day!? This is the happiest day in my life!
Dr. Kineil D. Wicks chapter 46 . 11/11/2017
You have no idea of the excited scream I made when I saw that this had updated (and the moment of staring dumbfounded at the screen)-I had all but given this story up for dead, but I still always recommend it (and have referenced it when writing Portal fanfics-this was the fic that raised the bar, in my opinion).
But it's so good to see you back! And it's great that you got your drive back-I'm sorry you were in a poor way, but at least that's in the past now. :D
And I can certainly understand doing a rewrite instead of trying for a patch job-a person's writing is always improving, and I know I've finished fics where I looked back at the first chapters and said "How did I ever write that bad?" XD Did it on a few unfinished and unpublished ones too-it's amazing how your writing changes after even a month of solid writing.
But again, it's good to see you back, and I'll be looking forward to the rewrite with great anticipation! :D
Person12 chapter 46 . 11/11/2017
Ohhhhh my gosh you updated! This just made my day. Even though this isn't a chapter, I'm extremely happy to see you haven't dropped this. I hope everything works out well, and know that I'm very excited to see what comes out of this :)
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