| Reviews for The Viking Duelist |
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WeeDevil chapter 5 . 1/13 Really really hope you continue this amazing story |
Primus2021 chapter 4 . 9/19/2019 So Tristan or Duke or maybe even Kaiba x Tea? |
Primus2021 chapter 3 . 9/19/2019 question? How did Yugi have 6 monster's on his field if you can only play 5 monster cards? I mean I get Mai being able to have a max of 9 Harpies, because Harpy Lady Sisters has 3 monsters on 1 card, but for this to work you'd need 6 different monster zones... |
mikekoetting5673 chapter 5 . 9/9/2019 This is awesome |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2019 Well if you are going for a Viking deck you could use the Nordic deck or a Valkyrie deck or use the Norse mythology to create a deck though you need to be well versed in Norse mythology to be able to do that |
fenixrojo36 chapter 4 . 2/25/2019 Sigue con la historia amigo |
Zapster45 chapter 4 . 1/15/2019 Update it |
SephirothTrueHeartlessAngel chapter 4 . 9/13/2018 interesting story...next |
BloodySS2God chapter 4 . 6/12/2017 While nicely written, this is just the canon episodes with Naruto tagged along. Naruto in this has no contribution to the story whatsoever. His presence has made zero impact. He might as well be not there. Even his "duel" with Panik is just the copy paste of Yami Yugi vs Panik. It makes Naruto boring and unneeded in the context of the story. Seriously remove Naruto from the story and nothing major would have changed which is a shame because he is a main character. Please keep in mind that I am not flaming you. I like this story as well as your writing style. This is just constructive criticism that you might actually want to focus on Naruto (the character you crossover with) instead of just writing canon episodes without any change. Show that Naruto's presence has changed things. If you like you could even have focused on his travels to Egypt instead of Duelist Kingdom. Show us how Naruto gets entangled in the ancient Egyptian Pharaoh stuff. That could help in building up his relationship with Ishizu before the Battle City Arc coz that arc is pretty much non stop with no break for relationship building. Instead of just moving the plot try building up the characters. Coz people love Yugioh not just for the plot and card games but also its memorable characters :) That is my only criticism about this story. Other than that I like it! Really curious how you develop this story here on out. Have a nice day |
Mew chapter 4 . 3/14/2017 Keep going, this is great! |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/4/2017 Your norse mythology is bad look it up first |
Glavie165 chapter 4 . 11/20/2016 Please do more chapters! |
Dragoncyber22 chapter 4 . 5/31/2016 continues the story |
l3loodKnight chapter 4 . 1/29/2016 Will yugi ever use the blue eyes naruto gave him? |
sketchywolf chapter 4 . 8/9/2015 please udate! |