I loved your story very much!

Honestly, I'm gonna stop here because this was a satisfying end. No offence, you're a cool writer, but I don't want to risk a good story being ruined with an ending I dont appreciate. Please keep writing though, you are one of the only authors that always does good work instead of just having one lucky fluke.

Rapiers are very light. Infact so are most swords. Most rarely weighing over s few pounds. Infact two handed long swords would often weigh around 3 pounds.

Nice mixing magic, tech, and technique

I really enjoyed this. Its my first story of Harry as a girl. I wish you had continued the story. Thank you for sharing your story telling skills.

I enjoy your work very much except for this particular story. My main issue stems from the pairing. I do not mind most pairings if I feel they are done properly and that includes slash, however my issue that I can't get past is that Harry, who spends the majority of his life as a heterosexual male, decides she wants to have a male partner because he has been physically turned into a woman. By that point in a person's life I feel like a persons sexuality is pretty much ingrained and the fact that one of the reasons given was because she didn't like the looks she got when out with other women. It just seems to me you are making sexuality more of a choice than something that is innate to the individual. However I will continue to enjoy your other work and hope to see more from you in the future.

Wow. What am amazing and sensitively written story. You are one heck of a writer and I am loving your work. Will be sorry when I finish reading them all. Please, please continue to write i am a mega fan xxxxxxx

love this story! :)

I stumbled on this wonderful gem several years after you had posted. I hope you are still writing as you have a wonderful style. Thanks for your efforts to entertain us all for free.

Great story! Really enjoyed it! Thank you 3

Great story, I really enjoyed it. I would love to read a sequel to it if it’s done or is still planned to be done.

Great story

This was very well done. Thank you.

I love this story

Very enjoyable!