That was so cute.

For his first time babysitting, I think he did pretty good, the cursing wasn't the end of the world. Also, poor roshi. Seventeen told him to help look for Marron and then kicked him in the face for it, lol.

Then off screen 18 is kicking 17s ass all the way to China then America

J'adore je me suis trop marré c’était mignon.

Please continue this story I love it.

I really liked this side of 17 I've red a lot of different fanfic work and i to say alot especially this is how I'd picture him to be

This was great!

that was amazing cant wait to read another

It's a really sad thing... pairings are really sad thing. This story, this beautiful little fiction stands out of the crowd. I seriously hate how you got 100x less reviews than you deserved 'cause you know what, this fiction is simply beautiful. I haven't seen something like that since ages. It's really sad how people don't read something as beautiful as this because of pairings and all... I hope this review makes up for lack of reviews. (Which I doubt tho)

The way you played 17 was just... awesome indeed. You also showed the minor character development within him since cell saga and tell you what, I imagined entire thing happen in anime, this thing, was so damned realistic. I loved the way you played 17 reacting to small children. I loved the way you explained 17's relationship with 18 and Krilling without even explaining it. Just through dialogues. I loved the way you showed how 17 felt about his past. It was just awesome.

Seriously, this story has potential to become one of the greatest fiction when it comes to dragon ball z (the show became bullshit after cell saga though. It's good to know that fictions can be still awesome)

I like the typical friendly yet still typical brother-in-law relationship between Krillin and 17 you showed. I liked how 18 and 17 seemed to be close in this one and lmfao at that Master Roshi, shit was just funny xD Love the ending tho, well, in the end, 17 didn't get his ass murdered by 18 xD Also, I would like to point out the minor and only mistake you've made. Marron didn't know what ass means and yet, she said kick the ass instead of murder xD Kinda weird.

Anyway, over all, awesome story. Best one-shot I've ever read in Dragon Ball Z fanfiction list. Heck, I'm not even sure if you'll be reading this review due to the fact that this fiction was published 2 years ago, but hey, maybe you will. Anyway, keep it up, I hope to see more fictions like this. Specially about Krillin and family :D

-Varun

*Laughing her eyes out* I love this! :) :D :P ;) ;D ;P

Very sweet.

This was pretty sweet. I bet something like this would happen if 17 took care of Marron

This story was very touching - funny and cute at the same time. I especially enjoyed the confrontation between 17 and Master Roshi. That scene was epic!

And Marron is so cute and innocent! :)

AWWWW! SO CUTE!

haha cute story if i were 17 at the end with that part when marron said ass i would be embarrassed