since nothing has been added i assume you did not get positive response from this. but it was an interesting idea and i think well done.

Ahhhhhh! I love it! Love love love! Way to go Spock! So wonderful! This romance made my Valentine's. Happy sigh. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Loved it. What a fascination Vulcan point of view.

Ohh, poor T'Pring.

Its been a long time. I would be very interested in reading more scenes. How Spock and T'Pring interact with her daughter from each point of view. And one from the daughter. I hope you still write and would consider adding more.

What happened to the rest of this?

lovely

I love this. Thank you for writing it.

Dear Mr. Ratliff:
This is quite good. I like what you'e done so far, and I think it would be intersting to see the reactions spock's former shipmates to his renewal of his bond with T'Pring, especially McCoy's. The only change I would suggest is the reference to Obama as a person that would be referenced in Vulcan's schools, as Dr. King might be a better choice in light of his impact on American and eventually world politics.

This is y I love Spock. He is so caring. He is willing to take her back and Stonns doughter as his. I can't believe that! She was a total jerk and a B to him I would have laughed and spat at her. Thx this is good. Keep going.

Enjoyed this softer side of spock. Good story

Perhaps Spock does not behave just as one could imagine, as his usual canon self. He shows his emotions too easily to T'Pring.

But I must say I like your version of the story and I am eager to read your new chapter.

Pure inspiration. We never knew their story before Enterprise; this really redeemed her! Heck it even explains who spock eventually marries after retirement from 'fleet.

Go back to bed, Spock, before you get yourself in trouble. Thanks.

This was short. Pls update.