There was something so terribly tragic in this. It was just lovely. And I loved the who portrayal of his Watching. Really clever.

I hope you write more Wesley. You really captured what a tortured mix of desperation, anger, and grief he was that last year. Good job!

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I think you really got what was going through Wesley's mind. He was desperate trying to find out if Fred was still there somehow. I think you nailed it.