I skipped over this story several times because of the premise-"Junior" dead.

Then I read your review of someone's story (I forget which) and was very much impressed with your astute comments on their work.

So when I saw your name attached to this story, I decided I'd read it, like it or not, and now I'm just as impressed with your writing!

Very nicely done. I'd love to see more HT from you-but please don't kill off Junior/Chance any more!

Scarlet G

I enjoyed your story, an very interesting look at what might have happened.

I hope one day that your write another chapter to it, because I certainly would love to know what happened next

happy easter

I put off reading this because I knew Junior was dead (and the thought of no Chance? that breaks my fangirl heart!) but on Cericsowner's insistence I gave it a go and I'm glad I did! It's a great concept, beautifully executed but I'd like to see if you can take a "what if...?" all the way through to a fully formed story. Chance was more than a product of circumstance, he had specific skills that he brought to the table, I'd be interested to see how Katherine would operate, especially considering the way Ilsa and Ames were (mis)handled in s2.

Very unique idea and concept as mentioned! The writing is an absolute joy to read. It flows so nicely and you style is great. Lets hear it for the woman!

To me Chance is HT and HT is Chance but you made this work and it captured my attention and kept it.

I'm so happy to see that with your writing talent you decided to write a story, as it looks like this is your first from your profile.

Beautiful and thank you for sharing!

Wow! Good heavens, I certainly did not see that coming... Considering the fact that at first I didn't want to read this, you certainly had me hooked by the end of the chapter.

Now that's a cool concept if I ever saw one. At first I went "huh?", then "mhmhm..." and now I'm "More please! Fast!" This is great. You totally drew me into the story, your writing style is enthralling. An admirable beginning, you've got me hooked!