I love this! :D

wow, this is a great story, and yeah, it's a bit dark, but I think that's good. Happy fanfics are overrated.

update soon!

Ooh! This chapter is really GOOD! I like the suspense and feel bad for Willowkit and all the kits!

Update soon!

~Dreamheart

Recycling my blog comment for you :D :

Deliciously dark :3

And let's hope for Windclan's sake that Willowkit won't go on a roaring rampage of revenge until she's older. ;)

My, you sure can write! I love this chapter... although poor kits! I don't really like the WindClan cats. I thought that they would take the kits captive (Whisperstar is breaking Clan law!).

Wow. Unpredictablility. That's a great quality to have!

Ooh! This story sounds rather intresting! I like that Mudkit's a she-kit. Update soon!

I love how well you wrote this, their emotions are portrayed very well, it almost feels like they are real! Anyway, I love this story, and hope you continue.

So very sorry to tell you this, but according to FFN rules all chapters must have some story content. This chapter does not. Please remove or combine this content with another chapter's. Thank you for your time.

~Veni, Spiderstar of LawlClan

I'm already in love! The kits are adorable and mischeivious and I like the allegiances! I especially like the name Umbrastar. :D

I am ready for the next chapter!

Lots of love,

Mistynight

:3

That is all. Keep chugging away!