Oh, the prologue's priceless.

This will probably be one of my favourite prideshipping fanfics I've ever read. I can't stop smiling over all your stories, they just make me foolishly happy. :)
You're always getting the characters staight to the point, you've got great humour and make all your plots so thrilling that I can't stop reading after a chapter ended.
I don't know if you're still writing... but I hope one day you'll upload another awesome prideshipping story. Maybe one referencing dark side of dimensions? That would be so cool.
Anyway, if not.. I just re-read your stories. ;)

I just finished reading thiw fic today and I'm so very in love with it..at first I kinda hesitated before reading since this is the first SetoxAtem fic I read. but dude! I think you ruined me for any other fic XD I honestly enjoyed it every part of it (even your notes and explanations)and I can't stress enough on how much I love your version of Seto, his character is almost exactly the Seto from anime/managa and I thank you for that because I used to read fics before and almost all of them had him so very OOC. I also loved your version of Atem, he's so very cute.

The best Yugioh fic I've read thus far. Stayed up quite late for this. Worth it.

Your stories are so incredible! Each one is so full of angst and builds up to an incredible climax. You can say I'm addicted. I'd love to see a sequel to this! What a fantastic job.

Great story.

Death-T as a twisted form of a love letter, never thought of it that way before. But it actually makes quite a lot of sense why Seto and Yami Yugi/Atem are rivals and still help each other out.

Now that I'm barely busy with things I look forward to finally commenting on your work :) I'll be passing out reviews time to time on some of the Chapters to express my opinion personally on them when I couldn't. But now be ready lol!

Well we finally finished it! After many coming-overs and Skype meet-ups we finished it with one more sleepover. I(both of our opinions) loved it, it has to be the best SetoxAtem story we have read (and mind you we read a LOT of them, wrote them as we go) but this is most likely the best. I think I'll stop searching for SetoxAtem stories for now because so far this one just takes the cake, and the icecream, and the pie, and all the other sweets you can think of. Well done, a wonderful job! :)

-Crippted and LadyMardore

Lol hours of reading and we stopped at this Chapter, just as we were talking about Atem's Egyptian body here it is mentioned on this Chapter! Major coincidence haha

... There is a lot more to astrology than sun signs, yes. From what you have described in your note, his sun sign and Mars placement are probably both in Scorpio (as Mars is typically prescribed for the men in a person's life, and seeing as he went for a man, would describe his lover as well). Aquarius would mostly likely be his moon sign, as the moon in astrology represents emotions and how a person deals with them.

But, a great story, regardless! Someone on tumblr recced it when I was browsing through the Prideshipping tag, and it certainly has lived up to expectations. I can honestly say I ship it now. XD

Finished!...and enjoyed thoroughly :)

Got a particularly crappy day at work coming up tomorrow - thank you so much for distracting me from it, might actually be able to drop off now this has relaxed my mind.

Great story.

Yay - the rest is here - for some reason my drop down went weird and wasn't showing the rest of the chapters...phew...happy now and off to read!

Absolutely loving your story - tension now almost killing me - I'm going to see if there's a sequel or whether I have to await an update...

Your Atem/Kaiba relationship is very compelling stuff and I've been loving the storyline.

Come on Kaiba - that's some pretty strong desire - give in to it already!

Thanks for sharing this :)

So after reading this, I must say that I am in love. I really, really like how you captured Kaiba's personality so well. I love your writing style as well. Amazing!