Nice story it was a pretty good read I hope to see a continuation with the story in the future

Another great story! Both heroes have to face tough challenges on their seperate adventures making new allies and enemies along the way. Nicely done.

Nice way to wrap everything up. Mary Jane and Liz are sure gonna surprise Peter! :-) Update soon!

Whoa villains are popping out of the wood work! Liz, Mary Jane, and Peter are going to be busy as hell in the coming days. Good thing Liz got a major power boost. She is going to need it! If things become to much for them to handle, then Liz might think about giving that serum to Gwen no matter how much Peter will protest it. Every little bit helps I say.

It is going to be fun when Mary Jane along with Gwen finds out Peter is Spider-Man and he didn't tell them. They will be so mad! (lol) Bet they smack him upside the head a few times. Peter was always dimwitted when it came to not trusting his friends more. Figures. All three girls need to berate him for that.

You know since the Venom suit was bonded to Sally that means she now knows Peter is Spider-Man and everything he went through. How interesting! Even if the suit is removed off her, she will retain that knowledge. Suffice to say Sally will never look at Peter the same way again. But on the plus side if you decide to continue this story after the next one then Peter has another girl to welcome into his inner circle so to speak. Don't even get me started if Liz by that time decides to give Sally the serum to. Hey one can dream can't they? :-) Do update soon. This continuing story line is rocking! See'ya! :D

Nice closing! Update soon! :)

Great closing chapter! Jubilee's friend survived. That is good. Wasn't expecting that. Jubilee going to join the X-men is nice. Perhaps Peter could join someday to. A lot of new villains showing up including Venom ( well once he gets the suit back from Sally ) and Carnage! Epic! Peter will definitely need help in the superhero department from the likes of his girlfriends. Was kinda of hoping Mary Jane and Liz would have made a appearance in this epilogue but just have to wait. Update soon and take care. :-)

Good chapter! Update soon Shadowsnake. New York here we come! :D

Cool chapter! Update soon! See'ya! :D

That was a nice update. I liked how Spider-Man and Sparrow worked together to defeat Black Racer. I wonder who she really was. Oh well hopefully she is dead or at least severely wounded. Her power was pretty cool though. You created a original character and made a her justifed threat to Spider-Man. Good going on that part.

I find myself chuckling at some of the other reviews asking about Liz's powers and wondering if she is going to get any more powerful or even Mary Jane. Seems most want the girls to come out on top for once considering in most stories Peter is the dominant one and the girls are mostly damsels in distress. The only way it could be even better if Liz and Mary Jane decide to give Gwen the injection also wanting her to join them as fellow superheroes. No reason why she shouldn't miss all the fun. Perhaps with each new injection, each girl will develop different powers. The serum seems designed for the females anyway. Liz would want to safe guard update soon. This story continues to hold my interest and attention. Take care. "XD"

Great chapter but sad. You can't save everyone as Sparrow found out the hard way. Hopefully she will have some peace and quiet now. I hope by the time Peter gets back to New York Mary Jane has a handle on her new powers whatever they are.

Are you going to jump into the next arc? I find myself giddy with excitement over that. As much as I Iiked this arc, I want to see what is happening with Liz and Mary Jane back in New York. Especially Liz and whether she gotten any stronger in her powers. If I might offer a suggestion? it was clearly shown that Liz was stronger then Peter and had other more advanced versions of his other powers thanks to the injection. She can now fly and shoot fire out of her hands which is awesome! Because of this her natural strength could be boosted even more. Say she was lifting 8 to 10 tons before. Well now she lifting about 18 to 20. Basically everything about her doubled in power. She is a powerhouse! Makes sense to me. Please consider it Shadowsnake! I am imploring you! It would make all of your loyal readers happy! I know I would be! Update soon! Good day! :-)

I must admit I am curious at what powers Mary Jane will develop thanks to that injection by Liz and whether her powers will be stronger then Peter's. Something that Peter will surely be surprised at no doubt. Please update soon! The waiting sucks! :D

Awesome chapter! I do have one question are you considering giving Liz additional powers when her story arc comes up again? Please say you might! I think it is so funny seeing Liz and Mary Jane be more powerful then Peter! Hey I am a girl and I like strong female heroes to! Thanks for listening! Toodles!

Nice update. Sparrow and Spider-Man make a good team up. Keep it up!

Cool chapter! Liked the romance between them. Kinda wished you had Sparrow draw out telling Spider-Man who she was if he had inquired just to tease him for a chapter or two but I understand why you went in this direction. Keep it up and update soon. Take care. :D

Great chapter! Keep it up! Cheers!