Great I love it
When will we continue?
Selene will be pregnant again when Mickeal?

I just read this fanfic and loved it! Please write more! Don't give up on it because this is really great!

Finally? A good Michael/Selene/Eve fic? That's well written? Where david isn't the new love/stalker interest of selene? How is this only at chapter 4? Continue pls!

continue this, s'il vous plait!

Thank you for sharing your story. I have enjoyed reading it.

Father-daughter moment! Love it! Update soon!

wheres the next chapter?

when will you do another chapter i love your work ur awsome

one of the best Underworld stories out there D
most other stories ive read make Selene out to be a weak terrified damsel in distress... which makes no sense what-so-ever. i mean she is currently (in the underworld universe) the most powerfull vampire out there the only beeings who rival her in strength are Michael and their daughter. and yet some how other authors make her unable to even fight of a simple everyday vampire...
anyways im really looking forward to more

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love the chapter and it had been awhile since an update, took me forever to remember what had happen recently. Is there going to be a romance between David and Eve? I love her feelings to being a hybrid and talking to michael. It would be great to see the events of Selene and Michael going through the parent stage, it might be good to see Selene care about Eve as she seems a bit distant. Michael knowing how why the hybrids were made was great, as he did get memories from Luican. Please update sooner :)

Nice, I hope there's more soon.

Awesome!

love it

Nice)))

You've managed to keep the characters in character and their interactions believable. I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for us for there is still a war to be fought. Update soon.