Great story as for what to do with fillers well someone needs to go for wooing Quinn away from Rachel as Quinn is the real catch. We need more dates and happy times cause no story can be sad all the time. Hope this helps and I hope someday we get more from you.

OK just want to say Santana may pretend to be able to beat up Quinn but if you watch their on screen fight they are evenly matched!

Are you going to update

What happened to Shelby?

Just a prompt, since story is not showing Complete. How about ionnthis story or another stoeyline isnce i odnt know yet what happens in the next chapter with shelby. But what if Shelby lives in an apartment unlike judy and the berrys, and when the girls go to college well quinn goes to college whhile rach works halftime for a year, Shelby goes to same city with them or even lives with them and becomes part time grandnanny to both kids.

Just realised that while Rachel has her fathers and even shelby to help out financially with raising Charlie, how'd Quinn pay for things for Beth besides Puck's side business?

Was looking forward to reading the sequel aince i liked how the first story was nut noticed it doesn't say Completed. Will you be continuing the story?

Poor Quinn. I hate Russell. I can’t wait to hear Beth call Rachel mommy or whatever toddler variation we get

RIP Cory but FINN is an A**. I can already tell what he’s going to do and it won’t work for a few reasons.

A. He once called Rachel a dyke
B. She has gay parents, so she’ll hate him for outing Santana
C. SHE’S gay, so unless Finn becomes Finderella, he doesn’t have a prayer because of A and B and as a girl Finn’d still be a Grade A moron.

Seriously, am I the only one who wants to punch
Finn. He’s about to hurt Rachel’s friend to get back in her romantic graces... someone needs to punch the stupid out of him... I nominate my girl Santana.

Also good job capturing that victims of sexual assault have good days, bad days and good days with bad moments. I’m a victim and so is my sister in law and we have various moments from day to day.

You’re an amazing writer and I read DLS in one day.

I love your story and I hope you continue.

I loved reading your stuff. I hope you are doing well, and would love to see you eventually return to finish.

Whoa need to break that up huge paragraphs need to be spaced out

Wow that was hot. God I love angry sex

FINALLY!

Side note. I feel more like I'm reading a story of one shots as opposed to a flowing story

I'm honestly not understanding Quinn