I liked it! Nothing like a good old fashioned size competition to set them off. I love that Draco couldn't even win one game. That's great. Keep up the great work!

Until then,

malfoyharry

sexy

oh my gawd i think i'm drooling lol 3

It was a good story. One thing that can help the flow of the story is commas. If you use more commas in the appropriate places it can help emphisize parts of the scentences. Great job finishing the story and the lemon was pretty well done. Have fun writing more stories :)

This really had potential it. Had a good plot line and a ton of smut. If you got a beta they could help it along and fix little mistakes. In all I enjoyed reading.

Love always~

Siri

So, who got the job at the end ? (a)

Are they, like, together or something ?

Don't say you're a bad writer! This story wad good and hot, just the way I like it ;) hope to be reviewing more of your future drarrys-which you will write soon for me and I can assure you, ialwaysgetwhatiwant ;)

Cheers, hope to see you soon!

Don't say you're a bad writer! This story wad good and hot, just the way I like it ;) hope to be reviewing more of your future drarrys-which you will write soon for me and I can assure you, ialwaysgetwhatiwant ;)

Cheers, hope to see you soon!