hmm.. i don't know what I was hoping for. in a way i am disappointed that Edward can't read her because it would make sense that he could, but at the same time I'm really glad that he can't.
I like that you brought it up either way

I really love the interactions you're giving Bella with all the Cullens, or most of them anyway. I love the relationships you're creating and it's so sweet to see how protective everyone already is of her

i like your take on Renee. i never liked that she was so casually played of as more of a younger sister or a best friend to Bella than her mother. like it was completely fine that Bella was the one taking care of her mother

soo, you've just made me completely fall in love with this story.

aah it worked! that's so satisfying :D

i have to say i find myself quite enjoying your writing style

i like that you started earlier though. that Bella's making changes already. it makes a lot of sense and it's an interesting insight into her life in Phoenix

noo, why the change in narration?

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Great story! I smiled through pretty much all of the chapters

After the sexual jokes getting old, the “I Love love Bella” feels abrupt.
In the beginning it was treated like Rose thought Bell as a infant because of her memory loss and she’s young. But now it’s changed to not, it feels worse than 100 year old vamp dating teen. Like Arwen raising her future husband. (Lord of the Rings)
And Emmett’s is to bro-bro enough to feel like incest, like siblings sharing a mate.
I honestly feel more romance with Alice, if platonic-romance is possible.
I don’t even know where Rose got the romance from. Feels more like obsession.

Maybe if there will be a Rose POV, it will make sense?

I’m not saying writing bad, plot bad, not really. It’s good. Just more my thoughts than anything.

(Excuse grammar and English, very late night)

Thanks for writing. This was awesome!

Not gonna lie, I find it hilarious how all of them seem to take it at face value that Bella just doesn't notice things. Which, yeah, fair, if she was a normal human and did notice, then the reaction would've been loud and clear.
Still, hilarious.

It's a really nice fic, I'm enjoying the read.

I don't know 'bout you guys but the love story here kinda reminds me of the movie,' Professor Marston and Wonder woman.'

Esme really said snatch from Renée