They're so slashable. Good job.

Nice! You nailed both of their voices—I love the dinner small talk. The juxtaposition of gore and marinara was also pretty wonderful.

That was brilliantly written! And incredibly in character - chillingly so, I loved it!

:D so good! I really liked it, it felt like both of the characters.

Very good story! The dialog was very much like herbert and daniel. you write quite well.

I really enjoyed this one. I could Invisualize it easily and it seemed as if it could have been a real movie scene.

( I don't know if Brien yuzna or stuart gordon would go through with it,but they should have)