This was so cute! They named their daughter Setsuka, so adorable! Their sons are cute too awww! This was such a nice, lovable story!

I remember there were so many times that I was hoping for Shouko to quit being Shou's manager so we could have friendly scenes with Kyoko and it's so nice to see! Also, the bit where Kyoko hugged Kuon was so cute :3

I can never understand those who favor Shou with everything he's done, anime and fanfics But anyways! That kiss scene did no disappoint me! They made out on the set kekekeke!

Wow, he's really an ass. Has the nerve to tell Kyoko that he doesn't want her to star in the PV when he was cheating on her. WITH 2 GIRLS WTF. Anyways, I'm looking forward to the kiss scene between Ren and Kyoko kyaa!

No offense to Kouki, but can he go away XD

I'm curious if Kuon was the one that acted as Cain or if you changed the actor up? Also, so glad he punched Shou. How dare he call her his girlfriend after what he did.

Damn I was really good I really love it I feed bad for them when they ask how they make a baby but I love how u did it I'll read more of your work I really like this story

I like how you switch the character roles around. Now you can see things from the other persons perceptions of things. Good job.

eeeehhhhh... All your stories completely line up with the manga plot. This chapter did too except of course it was complete 180 degree of the original. But hats off to a job well done. Everything was great but I am more of a Kanae and Yashiro fan. Dont ask why, I knida like that concept because the Manga did not actually specify Yashiro's age.

This was a nice chapter. A bit of a weird pacing though. Kyouko and Shou's relationship is odd but i see that you made it similar to canon which is fine.
I love how Kyouko interacts with Koun. Though that bit at the end with Koun calling her -sama didn't make much sense. I still enjoyed reading it. Thank you!

That was a great chapter. A lot of things were disclosed. Cain is a different character? Hmm that's intriguing.
Kyouko is so trusting and kind. I love that she is connected to the Hizuri's. Koun being called a spoiled brat and baby boy is so funny. I also like what you've done with his character. I look forward to reading more. Thank you!

I love Kyoko and Kotonami's friendship. You wrote that well.
That part with Ren/Koun is very mysterious. I love it.
Thank you!

This is a very interesting twist to the story. Good job with capturing their characteristics and emotion. I look forward to reading more. Thank you!

Loved the story

Awwwwe Keiichi and Shuuhei are so CUUTE