I like it. I just feel like some things were left undone. I'm not sure if you meant it that way or not, it's just the feeling I get from reading.

I LOVE your stories! I find them very interesting. You should keep writing.

*giggly fit* Ah, this chapter wasn't weird. I think you were just tired..

Anyway, it's good that you keep a few notes here and there. Other wise the story might get screwed up or something.. I made notes on one of my stories, put them in my writing folder, then never looked at them again. *laughs* Anyways, I'm waitin' to read the next chapter..

Seems as if you fret a lot if you don't get chapters up at a certain time. *laughs* Shouldn't do that, sometimes one might mess up or else jinx the story if they plot it out. Believe me, that's happened to me before. Just "wing" it.

*grins* Very good story though. Appealed to me the moment I started reading it, and now I want more, dammit! *laughs to herself*

~*~Mars

Great story! I love it! One problem though: when you last left Malai in chapter 8, she had said, "She's talking about the night we left. The night I killed James." (or something like that...) And when you brought it all back, Michael didn't know that she had killed him... he still thought that her father had done it. You might want to fix that so there's no more confusion... Other than that, though, this is really good! I can't wait 4 the next chap! Keep writing!

Great story line! Really original! An Egyptian man who's obsessed with the English? How creative is that? (What I mean is, it's VERY creative!) Can't wait to read the next chaps!

I love it! It's so original and I can not wait to read the rest, please hurry, as much as you can! It's nice to know the background of Evie and Rick's parents. I like the ending to your last written chapter, it's spiffy "She's talking about the night I killed James Hurlington..."

~*Marion*~

Yeah class of 2003 rules! I'm experiencing some senioritis already! Anyway, this is a great story so far. I'm going to go read the rest, I just wanted to agree that class of 2003 is the best class ever. EVER!

poor daniel...:(:(:(and as for the last part about nonsensical rambling i found none...the dialogue is really good and makes sense...:):):)

very interesting...fights...cops...i need more...:):):)

Good so far.

I hope you get into a good highschool really hard?

sorry it took me so long to review...its just that i went on vacation...and then when i got back like many others i couldnt get on the site...anyways, on with my review...this is great...i agree with Bridget about them putting excuses in the way...i still want to see what is going on with Robert and Malai...are they going to be in the same "excuses" situation or are they going to just get on with it...and let the vibes take them places...anyways, this is great...write more...cuz i like it...::)

OMG...this is just an awesome fic...i completely love it...it is so romantic...and great...to see how the parents of the best fictional couple in my opinion...got together...i cant wait to see what happens next...i wonder what both Kathleen and Malai are going to do about those kisses...anyways write more soon...i think i already wrote that...but i just want to say that good job...:):):)

u so have to continue...this is really interesting...i love it...please post more soon...