oh my gosh! i totally dig the way jak views the world in this chapter! great stuff; i hope i get to see another chapter soon c: 3

Yay! I really love this story. Will Dax ever turn back and what's the voice? I can't wait to know :]

I really like this, can't wait for more!

I'M SO HAPPY THIS IS GETTING UPDATED!

Love it so far. Hope to see an update soon :)

Oooh! I like it, written well :] Will there be more?

You are Amazing! I had to tell you! I love the back and forth banter you have so far! The joking way Daxter lives is set so beautifully! I can barely wait for the next chapter! Great, And good luck if you need it!