EXCELLENT
Thank you so muxh for this, I'll sing it at night to my children and my children's children

Bwuhahhahhhahhaaaa!:D

HAHAHAHAhaahhaaa
I love people in the mirror and this song

Thank you so much for doing this. It's fabulous. Omg.

Yes, good. This pleases me. I haven't read the source material where this comes from, but it sounds enjoyable. Very nice job with the lyrics, they flow very smoothly. Oh geez, I'm going to end up singing this to myself today...

Anyway, excellent work. I'm amused.

Sincerely,
Zenaga the Sea Serpent

This is actually perfection. Thank you so much for this!

Oh my fucking god there are no words to describe how flawless and perfect this is. I LOVE YOU.

*Cannot breathe because laughing so hard has wrecked my ribs.*

Ace lyrics, I'm sure Nele and all the other fans of that fanfiction will just love them. :D

Let me first say that I adore the story this came from! It was well thought out, true to Zuko's character, and it made me laugh! XD When I saw this song, I wanted to do a recording of it, as I really enjoy adding to songs in Avatar. However, when I read it, the lyrics reminded me of the song Rolling Down to Old Maui, a sailing song. I wanted to know if I would be able to record myself singing this song to that tune. The tune you provided doesn't work anymore, otherwise I would use that. You will OBVIOUSLY be credited for the creation of the absolutely hilarious lyrics. Thank you for making me laugh with this song!

*cracks up*

oh, that was perfect.

This makes me smile!

I've always envied you your ability to write poetry. The rhythm here is wonderful, and I can't find any lines that don't scan. The imagery is enthralling - have you been to Asia? This just sort of gives me a general impression of the Orient. I especially liked the line about the glowing lamps.

Please put this to music!

Oh man! That's great, seriously great. xD

I laughed. A lot. Oh man!

This made my day.

Poor Zhao, destined to never get some.

I liked the first chapter as well, very nice.

Oh, this is hilarious! I'm a huge fan of "People in the Mirror..." and was hoping that someone would write the lyrics to "The Balls of Captain Zhao" - and you did an awesome job!

I also really like your version of the "original" song very much. *g*

AHAHAHA ILU :D This is awesome. It should be a hit all around the Avatarverse.

'O, peril was breathing even now

Its cold breath on the balls of Captain Zhao.'

This is my favorite bit. Apart from 'Quite alive, but not quite complete.' Poor Zhao, no matter he ended up wanting to wipe out the Water Tribe. It all makes sense now.