Reviews for Fatty
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 19 . 8/1
Ok now it makes absolutely no sense why she was with Jake.. It would have worked the same without her agreeing go on dates with is insecure, he would have figured she'd want jake, see? The same.
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 18 . 8/1
He's a virgin, why can't their moment be special and not some spur of the moment bs... It's always like this when the dude is the virgin...

When the girl is the virgin, it's made a vocal point of the story and it's worked up too. But when the dude is, it's hardly ever mentioned, when it is, it's mostly to joke about
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 15 . 8/1
Ok I can definitely see why you got shit on...

Edward says, he wants to fit in and be normal... Do you not see how people may find that offensive?
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 14 . 8/1
She can't give him her love but she can give him her body tho?
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 12 . 8/1
You making Edward a fragile weak big person is offensive, cause apparently the only way things can go right in life for you is if you lose weight.

That isn't true, no amount of weight loss or gain can change who you are as a person, if you are piece of shit fat person, you will be a piece of shit skinny person, and vice versa.
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 11 . 8/1
She weights like a buck 25, if he can't carry her even before he started working out, he wasn't a man.

And really, if she was interested in Edward, why did she start seeing Jacob. that makes no sense.
Patriciadiane chapter 33 . 6/6
Wonderful ending for an amazing story
Love how their family and how it grew. The wanting to see daddy’s junk holy cow. Best ever.
Patriciadiane chapter 32 . 6/6
You scared me for a minute or two
Wow. great as I expected
Thank you
Patriciadiane chapter 31 . 6/6
I’m glad that Bella realized that life is the focus. Edward and yoga. I laughed so hard I snorted.
Patriciadiane chapter 30 . 6/6
Married
Baby
YES
Patriciadiane chapter 29 . 6/6
I love this Edward. Is she pregnant or was the tears eyes from her thinking about Edward changing his mind?
Patriciadiane chapter 28 . 6/6
Love these two good people

Great proposal
Patriciadiane chapter 27 . 6/6
I love their communications and Edward’s explosion of feelings.
Patriciadiane chapter 26 . 6/6
Love these two insecure imperfectly perfect people
Patriciadiane chapter 25 . 6/6
Whoo didn’t expect this part? Alice pregnant. Yes. Bella - weight loss drugs - no
Edward was excited about a baby and Bells was paranoid about the skinny B.
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