This one shot is so sweet, I almost started crying! This is an incredible, cute sequel to your story, and really captures Sherlock's inner soul! You should be really proud of this work

You have succesfully made me tear up - Which I'll have you know is a VERY hard thing to do! XD
Loved the previous story to this (Which again, made me tear up slightly) And Love this one shot - although I do like it as a one shot and finishes off the story nicely - It could be interesting to see it carried on into a story :) Although I would bring Sam back somehow, it wouldn't be the same without her in it (If it were to be a full on long story) :)

But I do like it as a one shot! :) And I liked how she died on her own terms, and for him :P

I will be following just in case it does carry on (Unlikely because I've noticed it hasn't been updated in over a year!)

Another interesting thing to see is an alternate ending (Perhaps another one shot, or even a full story) As well as this one, to see what happened before she got shot and how they could possibly change it so both of them lived, and then ask people what ending they prefer.

But I love this one shot as it is. :-)

I'm babbling on here, probably a little too much seeing as i've spent a grand total of 15 minutes typing this what seems to be essay out.

Amazing story - loved it! Keep up the good work.

-Caitlin :)

Oh, it's so sad! I think this is great as a oneshot all by itself. I loved When The Day Met The Night!

aw, made me want to cry T.T it'd be neat if you continued it. i would love to see how two sherlocks would be like, but if you decide otherwise, that's fine. it was an amazing story and I couldn't stop reading it until I finished. Nearly died when I was told to sleep, but that goes to show how great it is.

This Brought tears to my eyes

That's horribly depressing. You realize that, don't you?

Oh no Sam died :( This is a really sad letter but brilliant all the same

Wow! Great work full of potential. It would be a shame not to write more!

Love it!

It made me tear up, but I think it has the makings of a truly remarkable story. I also like where you are going with Rachel, in that that Sherlock has a daughter that is like him, would be be a source of both pride and torture.

I like that Sam went out on her own terms, its very fitting :D

Keep up the good work, cant wait for more!

X

This brought a tear to my eye. Thanks for sharing. :)