Fantastic plot. I absolutely loved this. Please write more about Jack and Jordan.

great story!

This is amazing!

Woah. That family is totally barking mad. *lol* A fun story, slightly OTT, but with enjoyable characters (I don't like much what you did to Royce, but I understand he had to be out of the picture for this :-) ). I waited for them to spill blood, and what did I get? A snowball fight. *snort* For all their madness, these people are actually very controlled.
I liked the stream-of-consciousness thoughts you injected into the narration. Really funny sometimes, and sometimes revealing, like the "Damn, she's beautiful" oneliner when Angus tried to get the story of the SERE training out of Jack.
And of course the idea of pairing O'Neil with Urgayle... -alpha male and alpha female, it was bound to be explosive. A wonder noone got hurt!

I think you wanted to name the oldest brother Ioan, but there are also numerous occurrences of Iaon in the text ;-).

I LOVED ur christmas story! Best G.I. Jane story I've read so far!

Absolutely LOVED this story! The characters were awesome and the dialogue was great!