Omygod this is so hot like this is everything I've ever asked for from this ship

Really wanna see a sequel where we see nathan deals with the aftermath and how he treats simon and if kelly finds out

Ahhhh so many possibilities !

Wo-wow, this is creepy, and hot, and BRILLIANT. I love it D

You're a good writer, I love Simon because he's loving and caring but in this he was scary as

Well, it pleases me that I'm not alone in my erm, "creepy" feeling of glee at this chapter. I loved Nathan crying as well. . So cute. I always feel anger and sadness when I see Simon so alone in the first season. Nathan should be nicer and stop calling him Barry. xP

...shit...

I'm a little sad this is complete. I'd love to see what happens after this. I also feel a little twisted when I say that I loved the hell out of this story. I like how you didn't try to turn this into something that becomes pleasurable, those annoy the shit out of me. Nathan cried, awesome. I think Simon wanted that reaction more than he wanted the actual sex. It's quite a contrast how you've kept them in character but mostly reversed them at the same time. In Nathan's chapter he was, in his way, gentle with Simon and patient. Simon just bulldozed in his chapter uncaring and rough. Loved it. Ugh, write another one!

Damn, that was a difficult read! I'm torn between the sympathy for both of these boys, as Simon obviously felt used and betrayed in chapter 1. Nathan so helpless against the mirror was horrible, and yet I wonder if Simon was using his invisibility to get the power over Nathan, or so that he didn't have to face the monster as he was unleashed. What happens now?

How incredibly in character everyone is...yet it never ceases to amaze me that Nathan can be such an arrogant prick. This is brilliant and fucked up, just the way I like my ffic to be! Xc

Holy crap that was amazing.

And hot and twisted and beautiful.

I loved it.

You kept them both in character, and I loved how Nathan cried.

I love it when Nathan cried.

I feel creepy now - but still, well done. :D

Please write some more stories like this. c: