| Reviews for War in Tokyo |
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OmegaUltima chapter 2 . 11/20/2018 Haven't quite figured out where the dragon is from, let alone who it actually is; initially I thought it was Haku from Spirited Away, but that got thrown out rather quickly; also no idea who the Michigan State Militia are Anyways, hoping you eventually come back and continue this, and am looking forward to reading it. |
Nobody Smurf chapter 2 . 10/24/2018 I am not at all surprised you are having difficulty. The sheer complexity of this story is overwhelming, and to do it so well is no small task. |
Nobody Smurf chapter 1 . 10/23/2018 I haven't seen a Ranma omnibuswreck this bad since Menzoberanzan invaded, though in fairness that one was Happosai's fault. XD |
Sonkuragari chapter 2 . 12/11/2017 Oh man this is awesome! I really hope you're able to continue this |
Tanya von Degurechaff chapter 1 . 6/25/2017 what a rare awesome xover. |
spicarus chapter 2 . 6/19/2017 I'd like to see you finish this story. If you really need to get Chiba inside the dome you could use Ryoga and his breaking point to tunnel under the barrier. |
shugokage chapter 2 . 1/5/2016 Definitely an interesting story great job! |
S0u7 chapter 2 . 8/6/2015 This is an interesting mashup indeed, and none of the characters felt too out of place regarding either their reactions to surrounding events or their interactions with other parties. On that note though, while there weren't any overpowered characters, the Generals seem to have been badly nerfed, and some of the exposition seems out of place at times. Also where the heck is Mousse with his rain of steel, especially since Shampoo is still here, and Ryoga, though him and his giant sphere of destruction could serve as a reasonably good dynamic entry/recuse scene. Cool idea this, the pieces come together cleanly, a little rough around the edges considering the strange talkativeness when exposition is required though. Ciao, S0u7. |
J.E.P 1996 chapter 2 . 3/30/2015 Take your time man, though I find it odd that a Nimitz-class carrier hasn't unleashed its Fighter Planes nor their Bombers. |
Fast Frank chapter 1 . 2/1/2015 Given that official ships' displacements are stated in long tons (2240 lb), the nominal full load displacement tonnage of 97,000 would exceed 100,000 tons mass. |
Veedramon chapter 2 . 1/8/2015 Is a shame your did not continue this. |
Veedramon chapter 1 . 1/8/2015 This looks promising. |
cko2 chapter 2 . 2/25/2014 A different story where the miatary gets into shooting monsters in a sailor moon story. I have found a few of this type of story and itvalways cool to read where toyko becomes a war zone. Very good story though. |
Meech Macko chapter 2 . 1/24/2014 Too many crossover and too many characters just killed the fic and ...there are no pairing jsut random actions...its just too much random. |
Red Death chapter 2 . 11/25/2013 I hope you continue this one some day. Excellent start! |