Cute story but you have a lot of typos and incorrect words in your sentences which was a distraction for me.

An interesting read but you have a lot of misspellings and have added words to sentences where they do not belong which made it difficult to read the story in its entirety.

I really loved your story, its a shame you stopped there. Wish there was more.

(Appluase) Nice story you made bob and mariam more likeable while olga and rest of ps118 kids are in character helga is more cheerful and I like she stay independent in other ways as well good job.

I think that's a fine alternate reality from how Helga's been treated and how she treats others. Except for Harold. :)

I loved it! Plus 1 fav.

This was a cute story and all, but you need to work on run-on sentences. You kept putting comma's where periods should have been. Other than that, I liked it :)

That was bootifuls!;)

Hi,

This is a really sweet fic.
You make me wonder what would be or Helga if only her parents would be different. Would she end being a sweet girl just like the female version of Arnold? Or would she end being still somewhat mean?

We all know she isn't actually a bad person, but even when it's all an act, she still bully around the other kids. How different she'd be from the actual Helga?

I'd like to see how it'd change her in other situations/ chapters

See you soon

:)

Awe I wanted to read more!
Well I loved it and the only negative thing I have to say is, I felt like the children were speaking too old for their ages

wow it's sad helga would've been a lot like arnold. still tough and a rebel against bullying instead of being one. It's truly ashame. i bet that's a real helga.

Great story. I thought that helga wouldnt fall in love with arnold but boy, was i wrong. I love this story. Update soon )

I like this story. I really hope you guys could update this soon :D

in like the story but i have a idase for the next one want to head it" pm me ok"

Interesting wonder why no one's done this idea yet. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Will you be doing your own version of some of the Hey Arnold episodes?