Reviews for Hesitate
littlemichiru chapter 1 . 12/10/2016
So beautiful. Especially the last paragraphs
KAT chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
OMG YOU SHOULD BE AN AUTHER THAT WAS THE SINGLE MOST AWSOME THING I"VE READ IN MY LIFFFFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
I LOV IT ITS SOOOOOO SWEET!
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Ooh, I've never seen this take before. Something this unusual is instantly likeable.
Whereisrainbowfizzypops chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
Wtf? WHY DO YOU TYPE THESE UP, AND THEN JUST DISAPEAR? IT'S BEEN WELL OVER A MONTH SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED! WHERE ARE YOU?
Atsuma chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Lovely, lovely, lovely! Great and fluffy moment. Well written and in character. :) Well done!
Livvie chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
The ending was so cute it made me tearful. Lovely little puzzleshipping oneshot :)
Dontgotaclue88 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
lol This is so cute! ,
ilovemanicures chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
I loved the ending line!

I seriously adore the way you write Puzzleshipping. When I read it from others it can honestly get boring - After all, Yugi and Atem aren't the old married couple of the group for nothing.

But you always manage to keep it fresh. Interesting and romantic.

So thank you for sharing! Oh and, happy new year! :D
Spindlegal chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
*tackles Yami*

Aww he's so cute!

Nicely written fic!

Yugi and Yami are the cutest couple alive - And it's nice to know that Yami's not confident all the time.
EgyptsBlackRose chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Aaww! XD wow that was so cute and well written! Awesome!
AtemFan18 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I liked how you begin the fic, the narration is very good and I like how you wrote yugi's pov. I think atem is a little ooc in the fic, mostly by the insecure person he is, but in some way it's true. I liked so much the final even when it was a little cliché. And the idea is very original, I loved it. Good fic!

Happy new year!
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Very sweet. I'm glad Yami was able to explain.
MzNightmare13 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
A good few people think Yami is this great guy who knows everything, but I really like this one-shot because it shows a different side to Yami.
rayevn poo wont log in so we chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
euwfygiyus4rygdfhiuhdr D'OMG THAT WAS SO CUTE LET ME JUST DIE IN THE FLUFF DYING OMG CUTE CUTE WRITE MORE WOMAN BECAUSE I LAAAAAV IT AND I'M YOUR GIRLFRIEND AND A READER SO YEAH OMG AWWWWJhgyfygudrtg Yay seriously that was adorable. I'll be favouriting it when I log in omg.
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