This story isawesome! keep writing please!

This is a really good story!

Interesting story. Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work. and try not to let your passion fizzle like I've seen so many other authors do recently, I'm running out of stories to read, but also don't lose faith in your ability as a writer. some people(read: Me) have difficulties putting their thoughts into words, so just because they don't review your story every time doesn't mean they don't like it, it just means they have nothing they think you need to improve. At least, that's my reason. so remember, your a good writer, and don't let others lack of positive feed back, or even one or two peoples negative reviews, get you down.

This ios a very good story, hope you continue it.

This story is going very well. Each chapter is better then the next. Im really enjoying this fic. I hope you continue to update :D

Hi. I'm , and I love your fanfiction and hope you will continue to make more chapters. And I'm sure lots of people with out fanfiction accounts love this story and wish to review, but can't. So don't let no reviews get you down! :D

Kairi: -starts in on a fake rant about how horrible the story is so far-
Dark: -trying to talk through laughter- Kairi... You...are horrible... Just...tell her...what you really...think...
Kairi: ...Oh, fine... -pretends to pout- Well, in that case... -stares- More! I demand more of this! It is wonderful! I-
Dark: Okay, that's kinda creepy...
Kairi: Oh, shut up. Anyways, I really would like to read more of this. Also, if you're not getting many reviews, just be patient. I know what it's like to have only a few reviews for one of your better stories... So, anyway... I'll be waiting for more.
Dark: -watching Kairi carefully- You are...
Kairi: Insane? A psychopath? Totally loony?
Dark: All of the above and then some.
Kairi: Oh well. See you again soon, I hope!

really like the story. hope nothing bad would happen to the girl

Great story. I love this unique ability u gave this new girl. I look forward to seeing what her true power is. Oh no... Axels bout to flip.. Update soon !

Fantastic! Really, really awesome! You have a great writing style and I adore your plot line! It's unique and fun! Great work! Update soon!

i loved it! cannot wait for an update!

I love this story if i had seen it earlier i would of reviewed from the start this is a great story keep updating please

its a really good story, your oc girl kinda remain me about one of my own named Celine, she too had green eyes.

anyway I hope there soon will come another chapter

I liked it I hope you can add something to where Roxas comes back or something. I've always thought it was possible that Sora could have two Nobodies. I mean, what would happen if Sora became a Heartless during the Castle Oblivion saga? Roxas would still exist. Would that mean a new Nobody would be created?

I comment becuase you plan on bringing in all of my fav characters GOOD JOB :D