Reviews for Lost Wings and Wings of Pain |
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Chalkmuffins2 chapter 37 . 10/25/2017 Please please pleeeeeease update |
Shiro-Sumi chapter 37 . 12/3/2014 Please update soon! |
LottyJubilee chapter 37 . 11/6/2013 Amazing story and plot. I love how you added new characters, but yet you are keeping with the story, and even the dialogue. I have seen many stories get changed so much they are hardly recognizable. I could believe that this is the actual Tales of Symphonia, if there was a Crystal in the game. Crystal is a very believable character, and I would love to see more. Her interactions between everyone seem appropriate, and you have kept everyone in character. I can image the difficulty in trying to keep Kratos in character while trying to create a relationship with Crystal. You leave wonderful hints and twists with Crystal. I was amazed at how you twisted the plot in a believable way so that she is the sister to Anna. I can only imagine where that will go, when we get to the point Lloyd, Kratos, and everyone else finds out. I have stumbled over some typos, repeated or missing words, and a few spelling mistakes but overall this story is written beautifully. I just found this story yesterday, and I love it. The only thing that is disappointing me so far, is seeing when you last updated. I fear that maybe you decided to not finish this lovely story. I hope you keep it going! It has earned a follower. |
Rebel-Of-Reality chapter 37 . 8/29/2013 I have to say, this is a very creative and original story! I have enjoyed it from the beginning (though I just discovered it a few hours ago) and am looking forward to seeing where it goes! The twist on Anastasia actually being Anna...I definitely didn't see that one coming! Well, save for the typos and grammar here and there, this is all in all a very well-written, descriptive story! Keep up the good work! |
Taeniaea chapter 36 . 2/7/2013 wow cool story |
1LadyOfLuck chapter 36 . 1/13/2013 Ohmigosh PLEASE update! I can't wait to see what happens next! Where does Kratos fit in with all of this? AAAAH! Totally awesome! |
1LadyOfLuck chapter 34 . 11/19/2012 Another awesome update, I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Guest chapter 32 . 9/7/2012 I absolutely LOVE your story! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
anonymous chapter 32 . 9/6/2012 Please continue this soon! I love this story! |
NikolaiX chapter 31 . 8/16/2012 YAY new chapter! Great work, and I'm excited for the next one. Love where the story's going and the last part. |
1LadyOfLuck chapter 31 . 8/10/2012 I love it, and can't wait until the next chapter! |
NikolaiX chapter 30 . 8/1/2012 I love this story and KratosXOC! Ahh please keep updating/writing. I made this account JUST to review/PM about how amazing this story is! |
1LadyOfLuck chapter 29 . 7/24/2012 Very well written, I can't wait to see what happens next. I also can't help but get the feeling that Zelos is sabotaging the group. Truly exciting. |
Underwater Dreaming chapter 26 . 4/18/2012 Still only 3 reviews? WHAT THE FUCK is wrong with people? My god! Review, you lazy assholes! |
Underwater Dreaming chapter 17 . 2/8/2012 :0 How rude, there are only 2 reviews for the entire story! Shame on you lazy people! Well, there are now 3. Awesome story! I look forward to the next chapter~ ;) |