Losing to killer teddy bears. That's a new one.

Wait a child of Athena was wrong! That is impossible!

TEDDY BEARS?! one word:awesome. B

Ba humbug :)

so funny especially the part where he pushed Will out of the tree

Lol, I love your stories! :)

Oh, Malcolm.. underappreciated, but definitely fun. And Clarisse being a pink teddy... *falls off chair from laugh attack*

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:D wow.

. . . How did you ever manage to think of this? I love it!

This. Was. Really. Extremely. Hilarious.

So much randomness :D

I regret to say this, but Will had it coming :DDD

Well.

(Hi there!)

Only Cheese would come up with killer teddy bears. I have to say that I'm really impressed that you managed to fit them in. I'll admit it was only semi-natural, but when would they ever fit in completely?

A truly enjoyable fic, though for me it was marred by the fact that it's finally getting warm here and I'm currently pretending that snow doesn't exist.

Leaf

I loved will and malcolm's friendship! It was cute! XD

:DDDDDDDDD

OMG. SOMEONE. WROTE. ME. A. FIC.

Ahem. Excuse the over-excitement, but no one's evah written me a fic before-

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Ahem. I've got it under control now. Promise. XD

I'm sorry for the teddy bear prompt; I was feeling a bit cruel at the time, and plus I wanted to see what people could come up with. :P And I think you came up with an idea that's both original in the archive (though, admittedly, I haven't read a lot of PJO lately XD) and a humourous read. I admit, I wasn't sure how someone would respond to this prompt, and I was pleasantly surprised with this. All the other prompts were integrated into the story well, so kudos to you. I particularly liked the way "platonic" turned out. Made me laugh.

-shrugs- No major errors in terms of spelling and stuff, a couple of typos that perhaps proof-reading a little more might have caught out. There /was/, unfortunately, one mistake that really caught my eye, just because of its probably unintended meaning: "But to make us all shut up, he allowed a blizzard to

enter the camp's boarders." "borders" is the right word to use. "boarders" would actually refer to the campers in CHB, wouldn't it? So, even though filling campers with snow would probably kill them and shut them up for good, I'm pretty sure that's not what you mean. XD

I think my favourite part of this fic was the pink teddy, AKA Clarisse. What a fitting colour for her. XD On the subject of characters, I think Malcolm was well characterised, with his tactics and statistics. Mr D was also amusing in his mention at .

Thanks for writing. :)

Wow, this was really funny.

I really loved how you used Cheese's prompts so literally and linked the killer teddy bears to the Hecate cabin. I also liked how you made the minor gods' children seem powerful, because usually they're portrayed as the weak ones.

There were a few typos that I saw, but nothing too major.

Overall, a very nice read.

Keep Writing!

~Sydney~