Absolutely fantastic. I loved this. Can’t believe I waited so long to read it!

This is a fantastically beautiful chapter.

¿Y Benjie? Pensé que este personaje terminaría cercano a John.

Hi, loving your story.
It has the right amount of drama to action for me and the interaction between the characters is very realistic. I see that you are worried about being 'true to life' for the accident scenes... I say you are fairly accurate as I believe that we are seeing what is happening through the eyes of 'non experts' ie the bank manager ect.
And for anyone who does want to give negative reviews - just remind them that the original TV series and the following movies and even the new TV show have very obvious inaccurate science and often massive mistakes with their rescues.
I can say that and still love the show... You know that you love a show when you notice mistakes and still watch it... Defend it and love Fan Fiction based on it. In fact "Thunderbirds are Go" is my favourite show at the moment... I have watched the episode 'EOS' over a dozen times. I love the 'new' John Tracy.
Thank you for he scene when John finds out about his son. I'd love you to write a 'missing scene' for this including the phone call on TB5 and his trip to the lawyers office.
If you are interested in information about disasters and Emergency Services you can find some good information on the Australian Government web site and the SES (State Emergency Services) for the State Governments. The New Zealand Government web site is also good for this.
I am a retired Advanced First Responder and have worked with a few Emergency Services including Red Cross. Emergency services has changed a lot in the last 20 years. If you want I can give you URL's to useful web sites... However I do not think you need much... As your work is very good as is.
Thank you for a great read.
Ngaire

Haha, I was actually anticipating that it would be a distraction to get Virgil down there, and then all three would try and take control of the ship or something! Glad that didn't happen, but man, that would've been exciting too!
Can I ask who your personal fav characters are? You kind've glossed over the chapter where John finds out about his son and gone to have met him - I would've loved his reaction to it, hehe. What can I say? I must love drama. But mainly action. ;).
Great writing so far tho! Quite different to the first part. I must've read that whole story in just one day. hehe. Pretty good stuff, though the boys are certainly dramatic! They must love their drama too. haha. :)

Hey! I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to review! Life got in the way there, but here goes...

Scotty gets married! Scotty gets married! Yay! And I was surprised that you didn't make John suffer.

I did find the ending a teensy bit skipped over, but you obviously meant that, and it didn't take away from anything and that's the main thing!

And I have to thank you two for mentioning me! Aah! It was a very enjoyable story, and I will always review and let you know what I thought, because I find the feedback that I recieve from my readers assists me with being the best writer I can, and lets me hone my skills!

I hope we get to see some more GrumpyMagrat collaboration magic very soon! Xx

Cool. 2questions. 1. What was John's little one's reaction when he saw his daddy again? 2. What did the kids do when they were told that Scott would be their daddy? Okay make it 3questions. 3. What is the sex of Tin-Tin and Alan's baby? Really like this storie.

Yay! A happy ending all around! Now... sequel?

Hi there,

I was surprised at the ending - I really was. Here I was waiting to see how you dealt with the emotions Alan and Tin-Tin would experience with welcoming their own child into the world (given what happened in the previous fic) but instead you left me wondering - one of the things I really like to do myself as a writer. Well done.

Lovely touch with the explanation of how Lucy's ring came to be expanded. Back then I am sure that Jeff would have just been another young husband affording the best he could and the extensions to the ring would have come just as you explained. Nice touch and some lovely images in this final chapter.

I think if I had any suggestions on how to expand the writing of future fics it would be to employ less dialogue and more description. I enjoy dialogue but I really like to read how the characters react to it.

You both show glimpses of your talent in that arena. I really hope you work to develop it further.

yours in writing

mcj

I am really sad that this story is over. So going to miss it now. This was a great chapter and I am hoping to see more from you in the future. Nice job xxxxx

Well you are welcome, but it is the readers who should be saying a big thank you. We love our boys so much and the idea of them getting a happy ending make us happy. So thanks for sharing!

Good chapter - Glad Neil is going with Jeff for John. Will look forward to next chapter.

Yeah! John will be ok but...I want Scott to be happy. Is that too much to ask?

Well, I'll find out next week.

Wow. Glad John are getting the help he needs to get better. He has a little boy who so need him. I hope that everything would work out for Scott. Some parts in the chapter was kinda funny. Those two emt's. Really. Glad they didn't fight. Maybe they mite end up as friends. :-)

So, he's still okay-ish. Good. Now maybe we can have a part of the story from Neil's point of view. I'm kind of sad that it's coming to an end. I can't wait to see where you go with Scott and Sharon.

Lovely work again ladies! Xx