| Reviews for The Mysterium Xarxes |
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   redHussar chapter 7 . 9/27/2017 It was hard to read this chapter without cringing - Harry wasn't badass, wasn't cool. He was a brat with too much power - he has no self control, no cunning, he is offending everyone without any immediate reason, he is ranting, letting his enemies know that they will be attacked... He is showing off his new powers revealing to Dumbledore that it will be harder to manipulate him. IRL he would be taken down faster than Voldemort as a danger to his surroundings. |
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/9/2014 Lols Nymphadora, Cho and Greengrass I presume are the chosen? Or am I presumptuous... |
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/9/2014 - Gasp - Does not the binding contract punish aggression against the master/mistress? As such how did Nymphadora have the ability to 'smack[Ed] him on the face'? |
| The unknown chapter 20 . 3/21/2014 Please write more of this story or at least tell us if you have discontinued it |
| voidblade6 chapter 14 . 3/5/2014 you know i'm getting a lot of molag bal vibes from mister I don't respect women and may use magic to get myself a damn slave harem.;p |
| voidblade6 chapter 10 . 3/5/2014 He is not very self aware is he. I mean just because they don't know hes a most dangerous criminal doesn't change the fact that that is what he is. |
| voidblade6 chapter 8 . 3/5/2014 I honestly like the burn it down and dance on the rubble plan more. ;p |
| voidblade6 chapter 7 . 3/5/2014 I like that everyone but harry is in character.. they all have their reason and motives.. And harry is just being a sociopathic angry brat that wants to burn/ change the world. It actually makes the story a ton better than if you relentlessly bashed everyone. |
| voidblade6 chapter 2 . 3/5/2014 dark and fucking disturbed.. Its kind of amusing when morons get something right. Which is probably the only reason I'm reading. On a side note a normal persons reaction to their friends not being allowed to write them would be to sulk. A dark and disturbed and probably needs to be put down like the sociopath dog they are would automatically assume they just are pretending to be his friends thus the world should burn! |
| voidblade6 chapter 1 . 3/5/2014 to be fair if your first reaction to a bunch of inbreds saying your dark and disturbed and said inbreds is to I'll show them pain and suffering never seen in a thousand years. Then you probably are even if said inbreds are morons you are a psychopath with a hair trigger. |
| MKTerra chapter 20 . 12/24/2012 You are overdue for an update! |
| imnotraven16 chapter 20 . 8/6/2012 very*1000000000000000000 great story |
| Gundamknight100 chapter 20 . 7/20/2012 wow, now this is one Potter you don't want to ever piss off. |
| Hkblarg Et caetera chapter 20 . 4/24/2012 good story hope you update. |
| Pedro Boncompagni chapter 20 . 4/6/2012 very good |
