Reviews for My Newsies Come to Visit
Wapomeo Huntress chapter 4 . 4/20/2013
Yo, UPDATE! This story is HILARIOUS. I loved all their shirts. COME ON UPDATE! Please :)
Guest chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
OH. MY. FREAKING. GOD.
THIS IS SO HALARIOUS!
I am HYPERVENTILATING!
AIR! MUST! GET! AIR!
Please continue! You're my favourite author, plus my names Kat too!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/8/2012
Hahahaha please work on this it's hilarious :-)
Mickey chapter 4 . 9/18/2012
This story made my freaking day! Love this! I was laughing so hard when they were on YouTube I almost peed! And when they were looking at Fanfiction was bloody perfect! Sorry for my excessive use of exclamation points...
newsiesluva chapter 4 . 8/27/2012
That was beautiful. Funniest thing I've read in months. I can't wait to see how Spot handles babysitting.
writergirl97 chapter 4 . 8/26/2012
AksmlshxakzskAkanxadazjaNnda . YOU UPDATE! And you didn't TELL me!? Augh. Whatever! You're lucky I was in the mood to check this today, otherwise...

But back to the actual story, I cannot wait to see how the boys wil do in school! Terribly, I'm sure. Besides maybe David. But oh well!

Ps, lovely writing and everything, and I love you for adding in a Doctor Who reference. I've just recently gotten into the whole thing. Who's your favorite Doctor? Mine is number 11 .
Guest chapter 4 . 8/25/2012
I love this I'm so happy you started up again 3 it :-)
StAgEcReWgIrl chapter 4 . 8/25/2012
oh my god, I nearly died laughing reading this! It's brilliant! Please continue! Your life might depend on what I'm about to say...I'm a madman with a box
blackraven72 chapter 4 . 8/25/2012
HAHA! Update ASAP! This is awesome :).
Cuba Meyers chapter 4 . 8/25/2012
Haha nice chapter! I hope you have time to update soon this is like my favorite time travel fic
blackraven72 chapter 3 . 8/13/2012
Love this story :).
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Hilarious! Everyone is so in character! Only prob; what happened then? Update PLEASE! NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED! :)
writergirl97 chapter 3 . 2/20/2012
NO. BITCH GIVE ME MORE!

I'm sorry about that, really. But hello, I'm Sarah (not Jacobs and not a Mary-Sue!) but please, I'm very eager for more! Dying for it, practically. I enjoy this immensley and I thank god for me being Puerto Rican and for my Honors Spanish 3 class cuz otherwise, I'd've died from your mother talking xD
writergirl97 chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
I. LOVE. THIS. Honestly, I laughed so hard through a couple parts. And this is so me and my friends! It's scary how similar. I love your writing and it's so intruiging to think about it; Newsies nowadays. They wouldn't make it through a day on their own!
Kraken chapter 3 . 2/17/2012
*gobbles cookie*

MORE! MORE!

This is really good

I luv your character so much, and those sayings on the t-shirts were epic

However, i believe that Sarah shouls punch some walls, soon, we're getting bored here

Your writing style is very unique, with very little description. But everything is so funny, and your descriptions leave room for imagination.

Oh, and will we see more of Cat?

cat's funny
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