Awwwww, I want to cry :(

I must admit I cried. Beautiful. I wish there were more works on Altair and his sons so well written.

I love how you focused this on Darim and I especially love the way you've captured his emotions

Good Job! :)

sad and wonderful. a job well done.

im not gonna cry

maliks death me crying

poor darim and altair

I love this - there are no words I can describe this story. So sad, yet touching at the same time, and so very in character. You get a glimpse of what kind of a father Altair was to his sons and that glimpse is more than enough to fuel this story. The sadness here and the grief are so tangible, yet you do not need to spell it out for us - very well done.

full of sadness, but great story.

Why did (sexy) malik die?

But good story

i have just finished playing Revelations and Altair i grieve for him, though he is only a fictional character it is still sad to see ones wife sacrifice themself for you, ah and to have your son there... it is heartbreaking.

i am glad to see this, though it is sad... *sigh* Altair makes a wonderful father it is a shame we don't see more of him