I really like this. My favorite part is where he had enough and demanded she wish for him.

Fuck.
Holy fucking shit this story was UNREAL. Loved every second, that was the hottest thing ever, your build up was just as amazing as the good stuff. Excellent omg!

Oh my gosh this was just amazing, just as she did with 'The Labyrinth' I hung on every word

Very VERY good, You should write these professionally girl!

that was so amazing

I very much enjoyed reading this. It was quite eloquent in its execution. It wasn't at all plotless and that's what made me love it. The way you wrote the sexual tension build up was positively perfect. It was so incredibly tangible.

Mmmmmm... Delicious. Imma just... Keep this one... My back pocket... Just there... Yes... Delightful, just uh... Keep up the good work... :3

Gah, I read this again because I read another story about Labyrinth, but have I told you lately how muchI loved this story? You need to write again!

Quite lovely. I especially liked the urgency in the Goblin King. "Wish for me, Sarah. Now."

Stunning.

-Arciere

Dayum. I wish that Goblin King would take me away!

i loved it

Oh my, that was insanely hot :) i need a cigarette :) great job.

Oh my goodness this was splendid! I really enjoyed reading it, thank you.

:) Nice ending!

i apsolutly loved it!