Oh, this is soo sad yet so gorgeous! Oh Draco, I'll always love you the most! TT PLEASE DON"T CRY! But seriouusly, beautiful story, well done on Draco's pov ;3 Can't wait for some more! (Hope this review makes you happy! XD)

[Scolds myself] I'm actually starting to like this pairing... [O.o] You're converting me!

The only mistake that really stuck out was:

I'm shaking from anger as I yell at my lover of four years. (Here, his perspective is to the audience)

I laugh bitterly and I can tell it scares you a little. (Here it's to Ron)

But the rest of the story it's to Ron, so besides that one sentence, it's not a big deal.

Anyway, I liked it. I love how you did Draco, I think it fits his reaction in this type of situation. Not wanting to go back to him, saying he's not allowed to be hurt and not crying till he left. Perfect.

So I think you used the prompts really nicely and I hope you did well on the challenge!