Wow. I love Bonrin, and the whole little mermaid thing is really creative... but it feels more like Shima is closer to Rin

i'm sorry but by Blackie do you mean Kuro? cause that is Rin's familiar's real name.

I just fell off my bed
thanks

I was checking out the summary and read 'Now Rin has 14 days to have Bon fall in love with him & have sex with him' and started laughing

I really loved it! I just have one thing to say and please don't take offence, but I think you used "mutely" too often. Other than that it was amazing!

Loved this! Bon x Rin! So cute!

Lol Amaimon is like a crazy cupid.

if u still need a beta i would gladly offer help. I'm pretty much open minded to all sorts of stories.

THAT WAS LITERALLY THE BEST RHING I HAVE EVER READ. LIKE YOU HAVE ALMOST PUSHED ME TO TEARS, THE SMILE IM WEARING RIGHT NOW WILL PROBABLY CRACK MY FACE! YOU DID A W

Great story, but... You need a better editor. There are so many typos I've lost count. I don't mean this offensively, it just makes it really difficult to read/understand some parts.

Oh shi-t
Loved the story _
SHIMA LIKE ALL OF GEHENNA IS CHASING U!

So many half demons around.
Half cat/dragon demon *raises hand*
Love story so far Scarlet-San

Ohhoho sit gets serious! the little demon style can't wait to read more XD

Ok I haven't finished this chapter yet but who is blackie? Do you mean Kuro? Anyway I love this story so far but it's a little ooc still gotta love it though

That was an amazing fic. Absolutely brilliant. You have captured the beauty that defines Rin x Bon. It has been a year. Have you written the fanfic. But I think I should probably catch up in the manga before I write it.